thank you! (: yeah, haha, you'll notice that this story DEFINITELY has a lot of short chapters. I'm not taking it too seriously because honestly, I just get an idea and type it all up then post.
Thanks you so much for the comment on [i]Yours.[/i]
It means lots!
And I will most certainly try to be more descriptive! Not many people take the time to give constructive criticism, so when I do get some, I try my best to take what they say into consideration and try to apply it to said story. :)
Ah well thank you. It is all a work in progress. I used to be horrible at descriptions, I still am. My volleyball coach used to say when we practiced serving to focus on one thing we don't like and work to fix it. The same technique should be applied to writing. Lately I've been focusing on description and trying to get myself in the hang of being more descriptive. Rome wasn't built in a day, it takes time, and who would want to be perfect at something at the very beginning? The fun of getting to the top is the climb.