Meru21 / Poems
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"Barren"
about losing hope. I really enjoyed this one (though not the feelings with it) and hope you can comment. feedback is most welcome.
March 6th, 2014 at 10:29pm
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"Past, Present and Future"
March 2nd, 2014 at 10:39am
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"Shadows and Shatters"
I just wrote this. I like feedback.
February 27th, 2014 at 10:40am
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"Helpless"
it's not my normal writing style at all, but I still like it. heavy on the metaphorical side. please comment.
February 23rd, 2014 at 08:56am
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"Between the Lines"
February 22nd, 2014 at 08:53am
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"Fragmented"
I just wrote this. its heavy on metaphors and analogies. I hope to get feedback because I'm proud and that doesn't always equal good.
February 15th, 2014 at 11:22am
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"Fleeting"
February 14th, 2014 at 12:13am
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"Collide Again"
February 14th, 2014 at 12:03am
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"What's Left"
written in response to a poem I wrote called "parallel"
February 13th, 2014 at 11:44pm
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"Nothing"
It's rather long for a sonnet, but it follows the parameters and it's heartfelt. About being in a physical relationship when one person wants more. Please comment.
February 10th, 2014 at 07:32am