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  • fearless-forever

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    Just how it's a bit weird how he stalked her, it's kind of funny and sweet. Mr. Green
    June 28th, 2012 at 07:47am
  • PassportToRome

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    No problem! Well fair enough then :)
    June 25th, 2012 at 02:18pm
  • n. josten

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    No, it's okay. If anything, I should be apologizing to you.
    I've come to realize that I was really harsh in my comment on your story. Which was far from my intention but from an outside perspective, I did come off as just purely critical and mean. I really am sorry for that.
    June 20th, 2012 at 10:27pm
  • n. josten

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    Well, if you feel what you've written into your story has a purpose in the end, then that's all that matters. I apologize if you took my comment as just being purely critical. That's not how I intended for it to come off.
    June 20th, 2012 at 08:22pm
  • squidward tentacles.

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    Yeah I know what you mean. It's irritating when people harp over something they don't like, and don't bother saying anything positive along with criticism. Honestly, there are so many overdone cliches in Mibba stories; I feel like having a blond popular girl is the least irksome of them all, haha. Plus I actually sort of feel like it's easy to relate to the fake, gorgeous blond b*tch in stories because it's a character that's easy to dislike. So I don't have a problem with that at all. And like I said in my comment, yeah, some of it was vague, but that's good! That means we have no idea where it's going, and it'll be easy to surprise us with twists later in the story. Eh, some people on here are just too picky.
    June 20th, 2012 at 08:35am
  • squidward tentacles.

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    Erm, I did comment on your story but I don't believe I said anything about the fake blond..? I think that was the comment below mine.
    June 20th, 2012 at 07:16am
  • OctoberA7X

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    No problem :)
    June 11th, 2012 at 10:06pm
  • HookedOnVengeance.

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    Thank you so much for your comment on Save Me :) It's really nice to have someone not take a little dig at my grammar... that's all I seem to get these days -_- But yeah, thank you lovely :]!
    June 11th, 2012 at 02:20pm
  • H. S.

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    Thanks for the comment on my story "Just Before the Storm". I'm glad you love it. :) I noticed my mistake, and I went back to correct it. Thanks for letting me know. I should be finished with the last chapter soon! Be watching. Cute
    June 11th, 2012 at 04:44am
  • han jisung xx

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    Thanks for the story comment! <3
    June 9th, 2012 at 04:16am
  • MERK

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    Thank you for your story comment! To be honest, I'm not sure how I do it. I wasn't even aware it was that good. Lol It was something I wrote in a matter of minutes and went with it. It's a personal story and a joy to write so I'm glad that you enjoyed it. I hope you keep reading! :)
    June 7th, 2012 at 10:14pm
  • XSoulXLoverX

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    No problem! (: I love being able to help people out when it comes to writing! :D
    June 6th, 2012 at 11:52pm
  • many grams.

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    thank you for your lovely comment! ^_^
    June 6th, 2012 at 11:04pm
  • hannerbananer

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    Haha, yes it is another show! It's NCIS. It's sort of like Crimminal Minds in a way. But thank you for your comment! I am working on an update right now! :)
    June 6th, 2012 at 08:24pm
  • MRGF123

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    No, you were very nice about it :) Thanks for the idea though, i might do some jiggling around once i finish the whole thing :D
    June 5th, 2012 at 11:32pm
  • MRGF123

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    Thanks bunch for your story comment :) I know it's a little slow to start off with, I try to set the scene as much as i can, but i realise some people might get a bit bored :/

    thanks for the suggestion for the summary, by the way, i'm so bad at them!!
    June 5th, 2012 at 11:24pm
  • han jisung xx

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    Thanks for the story comment! <3
    June 5th, 2012 at 11:15pm
  • william.

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    Thank you once again. ^^
    June 5th, 2012 at 11:09pm
  • william.

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    Thank you very much for taking the time to read and comment on "Captured". I means a lot to me. c:
    June 5th, 2012 at 10:58pm
  • Halo.

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    Thanks! To answer some questions: They turned back because of the barrier. They couldn't continue on. If they stayed out there, they could eventually get caught and in more trouble. As for Micah's situation, that will be cleared up in the next couple of chapters. :)
    June 5th, 2012 at 10:35pm