Raging Eyeliner / Comments

Brilliant chapter, i don't mind that it was short, and by the way, i'm not commenting out of guilt that you only got 5 last time, i just generally want to comment you.

Helena fiego is an absolutely AMAZING story writer, she's only got one, but it's really long, dunno if you've heard about her. :)

Hey you! I'm sorry I didn't comment on the last chapter..I've been soooo busy with school, it's insane..GAH!
Anyways I am super happy that you updated so quick! I hope you keep it coming, love. It seriously sucks about the lack of comments thing for this story, cause I know sooooo many poeple love it.
Hey, why'd you change the layout for the story? I liked the other one soo much better! It was easier to read (Don't ask me why lol)

i definitely sat there for like five minutes trying to figure it out.
i just gave up and commented though:]

Love, if this chapter was worse than the last chapter you wrote -- I wonder how good that last chapter was.. Seriously I loved this chapter. It wasn't my favourite one ('cause I already have two favourite chapters) but it was still pretty damn good.

You had to re-download everything? Whoa. I've had my fair share of computer crashes, causing me to re-download and man..I hated it! So you must be pretty frustrated/pissed off right now. Can't say I blame you.

The next one will be great. Just take your tiem writing it. Pace yourself. Don't stress out or worry over what we (Fans) might think. It's your story, we'll be happy with wherever you take it (I will, atleast)

I literally squealed!
Loved the update! Can't wait for the next chapter. It's gonna be about their anniversary, yeah?
Does this mean you computer is better now? lol

UPDATE!
Update, woman! You know I can't live without FYF. It's a surprise that I've lasted soo many days without it. So update! lol Sorry If I sound demanding, love ( ... I probably do ... ) but I NEED that story. Desperately!

MERRY CHRISTMASS && HAPPY HOLIDAYS!

I love you.

I actually, PHYSICALLY love you.

You know why?

Because i love your story "First you fall!" That's why!
It is seriously, not only one of the best mafia stories i have ever read, but one of the best avenged sevenfold story i've ever read! And that's a lot, trust me.

I realised when i read chapter 30 for the third time just now, that i'm one of those incredibly silent subscribers, and it made me feel guilty that i haven't praised you for your amazing work.

So here it is, i really do LOVE your story and i don't EVER want it to end :)

recently started reading 'First You Fall' and i love it it's awesome way better then the other mafia based plots that ive read. cant wait for your next update

Heyy,

I'm Saije and I LOVE your story 'First You Fall'
I don't know if it's your amazing storylines or the way you've made all of the Avenged boys' personalities out to be or just your writing style, you have successfully gotten me addicted to this story!
So congratulations lol and I hope you update 'cause I'm sure a lot of people LIVE for this story.

Anyways, happy writing!
xxxSaije

I love your story ' first your fall', !, it's really amazing, i love the way toni doesnt take his crap and be all mushy and actually wants to learn how to fight for herself but at the same time sweet ,kinda reminds me of myself - especially the cussing hah-Zacky i think is a really good character, it's good when you switch point of viewes so you can see how he feels, i'm kinda suprised i even read it because i'm a 'brian kind of guy' haha. if you get what i mean!, i really enjoy it and can't wait too see your updates!

first you fall is amazing. I'm addicted!!!

I'm loving First You Fall!!!!
hope you update soon! i'm begging you here i live off the story
ok so a bit of a lie there but you get me gist

Duuuuuuuuude
You totally need to update FYF
That was a little demanding, I apologise lol
Seriously though <3
I am being deprived :(
Lol, well I hope you do it soon anyway ^_^
x

I have a new story called You're Friends Can't Help you, and I thought I should let you know about it. It's a Matt Sanders fan fic and it's a very dark and twisted story. Poor guy gets tortured. lmaololl I don't know why but the story brings a smile to my face. OH and I had to make Matt and Brian gay lover lmaololl!! I hope you check it out babe!

yo i'll funny statement that i read in the Zacky V. story... it reminded me of Joe saying " i know where you live, which room is your, and how to get in"

Just so u dont get confused she's reading a text message.

'I'll just come over now and wait for you. Is that okay? XoX Zacky V' the first one asked. She shook her head and read the second. 'I'll take that as a yes. I'm in your living room now, I hear you showering. What would you do if I walked up there and joined you? XoX Zacky V.'

http://www.mibba.com/story/MCR6661Iero/Opposites-Attract/chapter-4/ yo you need to read this it is the funniest fight scene ever... enjoy!!!! oh yea its A7X

Hello sweets! Don't worry thats not some stalkierish thing i call everyone sweets or something of the sort! Yay for terms of enderment! Gah Your First You fall story is fantastic! Simply Amaczing. Please keep it up!

no problem.
hehe and yeah. i say oi alot too. makes me sound all foreign-y and cool. ^^
XD

Ou, you are welcome :)
I say-out loud what I think, and if I like the story I will tell it, but if I don't I would say what is the problem, why don't I like it.
And, well, the update was good, although I am reading just on of your story, the non-vampire story, and let's face it, the idea is somewhat, hm, well, there are very many mafia stories on mibba, but I could count on my one hand which are reading-worthy, and the idea of Zacky as a leader. Well... That was something new. I never thought about it, because Zacky, he looks like... A bit quiet, a bit shy and so, but he's adorable, I really like that Man (chuckle)

Anyway, I will be reading your story, because it doesn't jump-on events, and it goes smooth, all the way, and I must say, I like the main charter - Toni, she's a very beautiful girl and all, and the attitude is muaa, great :)

SADdpsinhaeinh
If you stop updating First You Fall, I'll stop updating You Are The One lmfao
Seriously, I get more excited for your story than nearly anyone elses on this website, because it's so damned good and I love it to bits
So don't stop it! Keep writing :D
'Cos I love it to bits =]