Lil'Biskette / Comments

Thank you for the comment on 27! I know the summary is kinda weird, but it's meant to be. It makes me really happy that you can picture it all happening like a movie because my dream job is screenwriting, so I guess that follows me into all my writing endeavors, haha. Also there is a reason the narrator doesn't actually, physically speak until the third chapter and that would be for the sake of symbolism, my dear

Thank you very much for your comment on my story Shadows in the Woods - I agree with you that my layout doesn’t fit the mood I was going for with my story - not that it could really be called a story yet . I’ll have to go back to review and edit my work, I wrote it so long ago, my style has probably changed a bit since then. Out of curiosity, who did you imagine the protagonist to be and did you imagine them in any particular society? I love feedback, so thank you again

On another note, is comment swap working for you? I don’t have a link for any story to comment on (a glitch which has been going on for months). Which story would you like me to comment on?

@ Lil'Biskette
no problem

@ recluse-
yyyaaaaaayyyy thank you!!!

Just wanted to let you know that chapter 3 is posted

Hey I edited my poem so you can read it now:)

Thank you for commenting on my poem "We are the Daughters", it meant a lot to me and I'm really glad you liked it!

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What errors did you see? (:

Thank you for the lovely comment swap. I'm glad you liked it, and I value such a compliment from someone who writes a story that I'm now hooked on! Haha, thank you again! x

Thanks for the comment on The L Word! I'm glad you liked it and I hope you keep reading =)

thanks for your nice thought out comment on nine in the afternoon... it is a great song right? :D and I will fix the layout thanks for pointing it out! and yeah I'm terrible with grammar and run on sentences and such :/ and thanks for the thoughtful comment even though comment swap sent you it means a lot :D

Yes, Latin titles. c: Thank you~.

Thanks for the comment on my story. I appreciate the time you took to con-crit, but I know you're not supposed to start sentences with "and", etc. That's why I did it. ;-) <3

Thank you for your comment, I am working on the grammar I am re-reading my chapter and summary out loud so I can find my mistakes. I plan to get into more description in the next chapter, I'm just still trying to figure out exactly how Whinnie looks like. Along with the rest of the characters.

@ Lil'Biskette
You are so welcome. Ah, I'm so touched. Don't make me cry. D: And thank you again. C:

@ hamsterpilot
Thank you for writing such flawless writing. I am a very hard critic because I have done so many comment swaps (too many). You're the first I had really exploded like that too, I feel all weird now. Good work!

Oh my god... oh my god... I... when I read your comment, I had my hand over my mouth, and I literally almost started crying because I was so, soo happy. I read it over, and I think I saw a lot of the repetitions that you mentioned. I'll make sure to be more careful with the some of the descriptions. I also felt they could be a little better. But thank you... Thank you so much. Thank you for leaving such an amazing comment. I am really, really happy right now. I LOVE YOU.

At the beginning of chapter 2 this line, "Oblivious to her blade, she sliced my hand and cursed from the pain as she retrieved her phone." was confusing for me. Also just how Domminick is suddenly there seemed to lose me a little bit. Mostly that. Also it says Ivy can not remember her real father and then later on it says, "'As long as you believe in Him Ivy, you will be able to do whatever you feel that needs to be done,' were the last words Ivy could remember of her father." so I'm slightly confused on that.

@ cadleigh96
You can actually borrow a layout. It's under the comment swap part in the "stories" box. I borrowed one, it's really simple. Just click and put it so that you can use it for your story.

Thanks for the comment. I'll work on the detail, and the reason everything is in past tense, is because it's a first person narrative, nothing to terribly special- it's the form that works best for me. As for my layout... I have so much trouble with it as it is, I don't want to mess it up further. Thanks tons for the constructive criticism, it's much better than 'Upload soon!' I appreciate it tons.