Hey LilBiskette, sorry I havent been online for awhile, my laptop crashed. I'm not sure how much help I can be but I'll try to help you in any way I can. Are there any specific things you seem to be having trouble with?
About my poem So Close....
I purposly formatted my poem like that( and it is a poem, NOT a song). The contradicting lines are placed as such to create interest and provoke thought, as well as conveying mutiple emotions.
Your Already Great.! iThink You Should Keep Up The Good Work & You'll Be A Famous Poet.! Dont Ever Say Its Not Possible Because You Never Know You Are Great.!
& iCommented Some More Advice On Bullies Again iHope It Helps.!(:
iRead Your Poem "Bullies" & Its Really Good iLike The Point & Meaning Of It....but What iDo To Make My Poems Flow Together Better Is Rhyme The Last Words In The Sentence....Do You Know What iMean.? Like Say The Poem Is Like "Her Pain Feels So Real
& Her Wounds Wont Heal" .....Does That Make Sense.?