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Wat. I honestly don't get it. Presumably you don't like Teal anymore? I don't think you understand the level of confusion you've thrown my way.

I have no idea what your comment meant. o.o

I'm too tired for this. ><

@ Lyndon Lockwood
Thank you I'm glad you have a nice impression of me. Sure ill check it out if its not high rated. What's it called?

You seem like a nice, oh and awesome person who enjoys reading and would giv some good and credible reviews. One of the kids at my Tae Kwon Do club had recently started writing, he loves doing it but wants some points for improvment. I'm helping him with his first ever project (and am listed as a co author and so you can find it on my page) would you read his story and help him by writing some stuff, positive and negative and give him some improvment tips? Oh and recommend it pleases, to anyone you think. i've told him this is a good place for reviews.

Thanks for the story comment! :)

Thank you!

@ polka
I am doing a non paid student job that basically teaches me stuff about the corporate world. It's a nice place but being without pay is really hard sometimes.

Yeah check it out and tell me your thoughts! Yeah our fasts are from 4am -9pm

Well it's going pretty well. But we're in our winter months so the fast is reeeally short. It's pretty long over there isn't it? and I will most definitely check it out :) so where do you work?

@ polka
well Ramadan is here! It's really weird working at the same time as trying to write...I literally haven't had any time. I come home pray and sleep. How about you?

P.s. I got another chapter of my story out today... Let me know if it flows with the rest, it's been a while

Thanks for the comment on Be Alone! And the story's supposed to be a little sad and vague and what have you. That was like a one time thing and later on she'll be her normal super sassy angsty self again. Hope you enjoy.

Wa alaykum salaam! And yes... That poem. I think I realised I have an actual story abd that poem was sort of meant as a prologue but it's a really sucky story. I have some major editing to do. Although I do have a poem story, I think I'll post up the first part today or next week sometime. And your writing seems pretty solid. I don't think I saw any sort of errors or anything. Are you ready for Ramadhaan?

Yay poem comment! :D and I totally get you. Man, I found that poem and I got sad all over again. But I think when I wrote it, I wanted to sort of depict what happens before like... The healing and stuff can begin you know. But I get what you mean... I think I might have a follow-up to that saved somewhere. I just need to find it.

Hi!
Thanks for leaving a comment on Peace in Death, and sorry it took me so long to reply.
I’ve been meaning to watch Up. I swear I must be the only person not to have yet, hahah

I thought that cremating her would suit the story and that the ashes being carried away by the wind would embody the freedom and peace I had wanted to create. I feel if she was buried it would lose some of that.

Thanks again for your feedback :)

Thanks heaps for your comment on Nimbus!!
We'll work on describing the ship soon, I promise! Haha

Thank you for your comment on Nimbus.
I would have described the ship a bit in my chapter, but I was having some issues with my computer and so the chapter is not as long as it was originally going to be.

Well, I had no choice but to choose your names, since no one else suggested others. But I did like yours. Titan seems very strong and tough, just like Sybil and her stallion, while Ruby is more gentle, kind, like Sampson and his mare. They are both very fitting.

Thank you for your comment!

@ polka
JazakAllah Khair :)

@ discoveringclouds
That is absolutely wonderful, mashaAllah! I am so proud of you! May Allah make it easy for you and grant you Ilm through what you learn and may it be a means of helping others understand the beauty of Islaam. Wow, I´m so happy for you!

Thanks for your comment!

I do like those names. I'll probably end up using them, you're the only one who comments so you'll probably be the only suggestions that I get. But I like them, so it's okay!

I'll go back and replace all the "his mare" and "her stallion" with their names at some point.

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