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Would you tell me what part of my story I had that little mix up so I can fix it? Thanks :)

yo smexi
u ok
ramdom
lolness
ly xxx

thanks for the help with the poem

i shall remember that

i dont really write poems that much so i need all the help i can get =]

xXx

lol alot of people i got to school and talk about and they are like what the fuck you on about?

Yeah.
that is so true.
maybe ill buy it.

Thx for the comment the poem thing is not me but I really want to write a story ha ha. I keep putting it off I'm glad people are liking it I was bored one day I llike dark things.....

Not minee actually.
just a random pic in u.o.
xD
i wish it was mineee!
nice tree

oh and thanks for the comment and all!
=D
aha

hehe
thank you or the tips!
it was actually a poem i wrote for english =]

Thanks for reading my stories - HEY and guess what? - I have more up! Read them if you ever get the time :)

DeviantART im fine thanks :)

lol thanks :) it off an art site i use :P Hows you?

Thanks for the comments on my poems. i will take the note into consideration and maybe change them later :). Yes they were written on the same night so they probably had the same feelings in them. i only ever write from my feelings so what evers in them is genuinely from my heart.

Glad you liked them :)

Katie :)

And thanks for all the comments on my photos too :)

Aw thanks so much for talking the time to read them! :)

im good
doin much this evening?
wb x

Hey check out my stories if you get the time

Dude it so should be! :)

(Talking about my "What I Am" poem) Yeah, you're write. Man, you are seriously the best critique I've ever had in my life. Thanks again

I think I get it; but just to make sure I'll try and write a poem with that and then I'll post it, let you know, and see what you think. K? Thanks again :)