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I've got a great one!!! :Alex as a GOTH.

i agree, panic be the cheese to my ziti. xD haha

*Takes red light bulb
Smashes on ground
Then grounds the zombie's f*ck*ng face into the shards*
Yay!

Thanks for the friend reques and comment! Glad you like the stories ;)

Hahahah! The easter alligator!
(To santa's coming to town)
"Lock all your doors,
Swallow your screams,
Make sure you run fast, to pick up your kids."
(In background)
VOICE 1-OMG IT'S STILL MOVING!
VOICE 2- I'll get the shovel.

thanks for the welcome

and i love that song =]
and i love dane cook too =]

thanks
and sure ill check them out and tell you what i think

This is what I've got---


For how long had I been kept from the outside world? Nine? Ten years? What a long time. What had I missed while I was away? Has anyone of my family died? Is emo still a ‘cool’ thing to be? Is my father still ill? How is my daughter and son? Where has my mother ventured in her adventures?

So many things can happen in ten years. What will have changed?





Characters:

Mother: Halley R. Kallisic

Daughter: Megan L. Kallisic

Son: Xavier J. Kallisic



Ex-Husband: Alex Urre

Step Mother: Katie P. Urre



Grandfather: James G. Kallisic

Grandmother: Lana Y. Kallisic



Halley has just come back from jail. Her crime is prostitution. She is a Catholic. She has a PHD in Psychology and has seven years experience in her field of work. She is 42 years old at this time. She has divorced once, and currently isn’t married. She has two kids- Megan and Xavier.



Megan is fifteen years old and lives with her father and step mother during the summer. She does okay in school with three ‘A’s, two ‘B’s and two ‘C’s. She goes to Saint Mary’s School for girls. She loves her mother and has nothing against her father and stepmother. She is the youngest child and her brother is Xavier.



Xavier is eighteen years old and lives/travels with his grandfather and grandmother. He schools online and holds a solid 2.0. He plans on going into finance next year and has a online tutoring website which he is using to get money for college. He hates his father and blames him for his parent’s divorce but is oblivious to his stepmother. Because of this, he travels with his grandmother and grandfather.


Alex is the father of Megan and Xavier. He’s married to Katie but had divorced Halley because of loss of interest, thankfully on both sides. Megan lives with him but Xavier lives with his grandmother and grandfather. He is a science teacher and has a PHD in elemental science and software Architecture. He is 45 now.



Katie is married to Alex. Her maiden name is Yearling. She did not finish high school the first time around, and dropped out in senior year to run away with a guy. She was abused in that relationship and worked for eight years as a drink mixer at the Hate Spell Bar. She is currently unemployed but is working on getting a degree in American History. She is pregnant and is trying to get the nerve to tell Alex. She is 39 years old.



James is married to Lana. Both of his parents died in a traffic accident about thirty years before now. He is 70 years old. He’s the father of Halley and grandfather of Megan and Xavier. He is unemployed and travels with his Wife and Grandson. He used to have a job as a movie sound editor. His favorite thing is reading books and tells stories to people he meets during his travel.



Lana is 65 years old and happily married to James. Her father died from a heart attack about fifty years ago. Her mother is slowly dieing in a nursing home about twenty miles from Santa Barbara. She is currently traveling the eastern hemisphere in Asia with her husband and Grandson. She used to be a secretary but got Carpel Tunnel and now has a business making advertisements for all sorts of corporations that offer her money to do so. She enjoys listening to early Jazz or her husband’s large range of stories.



Thats all I've got right now.... :)

Be sure to check out my story it'd really help to know what other people thought. =] I'll read some of your stories for sure.

Just tell me when it's up! :)

Ps- Danke fur dein commit. Lol. Bored.
"Normal" is blocked by a road.
I have three other stories I really want to start but I'm gonna finish this one first. Question- what do you think her brother might be doing when he's not home.
I've got about a million ideas for that but I cant quite get it...

God math teachers. My mom says that outside work they do things like garden.
I WILL NEVER BE A MATH TEACHER.

NO problem:)

thanks for the poem comment =)

thanks for the comment. maybe I'll do anotherone on memories twin.. 0.o could be interesting, eh?

hahaha I was waiting for one more person to tell me what they wanted me to do it the story so now I will write the next chapter.
=]

Thx a lot..its mean a lot to me
xoxox

Thank you for commenting on my poem<3

thnx 4 the comment on the poem. I got it from som1 who got it from their friend lol

Haha, thanks for reading my fanfic.
I wanted to make this as opposite as I could. I essentially think that Bella was really greedy and Breaking Dawn had a very ... fairy tale ending. I loved it though, but I always wondered what it'd've been like if Bella had lost. So it makes me cry, when I'm writing about killing Jacob.
I mean I just wrote the next chapter and it's funeral and god I was crying! XD aha.

I just stay up 'till three then fall ah-sleep

I think... I inhaled my lungs.... 0-0....
I'm freaking scared out of my mind!!!
But I feel... empty....more (At lose of words)
I woke up at 4:15 pm yesterday, is now 5:15
I'm awaiting a crash