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I... I can't form words.
My brain is mush.
Holy crap.
Hands and Knees was pure brilliance!
Good job! I think it's my all-time favorite. And I've read LOTS of fics.
Very, very few compare to yours.
I absolutely LOVED it! I couldn't turn away.
I'm about to read Sticks and Stones.
Churn out some more genius, okay?
Haha, good luck with everything.

AWWWWW:(
I think you just broke my heart.
PLS. PLS. PLS:)

Hey green and yellow! I just finished S&S! IT WAS AMAZINGLY AWESOME! haha yeah, im just that cool. Have you started a new one yet? I'm gonna go check your profile on the archive and see, but if you have i cant wait to read it!

Green and Yellow! So sorry this review is mega-late.

Blame my teachers. Hahah.
But I'll cut to the chase, and say that the end to S&S was amazing. Of course I wanted Nick and Evie together, but it was left open, right? I think that was the most realistic way of ending it. As much as I hate to admit it, having Nick just easily take her back would have been too cliche. However, in my mind, they're getting married and makng lots of adorable babies and playing guitar together till the end of time. Hahahah. A girl can dream, right?

I understand why you ended the way you did, though. Actually, I think I'm the one that said the “What if Jalex is the real, true love story, and Nick and Evie were only together to bring Jalex together?!” thing. If I wasn't, I'm sorry to whoever I tried to take the credit from :).

Random thought: Jalex's hypothetical wedding may turn out very awkward for Nick and Evie. I would not want to be her if Nick and Demi's relationship takes off. What a weird walk down the aisle, huh? "Ok we're gonna link arms and pretend that it's not killing me knowing that you're with her now, and I screwed everything up years ago." Alright, now that I'm cringing for a fictional character, the random thought is over.

Now, I'm going to say what I really wanted to in the first place. Which is, thank you. You created two fantastic stories, and should be very proud.
How did you come up with these ideas?!? They were so unique, and you had the writing talent to back it up.

I can't wait to check out the new story!

Is your new fanfic a Kevin-related? Like is he the main guy?
I want to read it but its too long and I have homework.

Thanks in advance. :}

I recently just read both of your stories.
and they were both absolutely amazing.
you are an awesome writer.
just wanted to let you know. :]

hahahah, no problem! i saw it and had to tell you.

Yes. I finally came around to finishing it! I was clogged with homework. Anyways, love love this story. Oh, I remember it when I was bored one summer looking to read a fanfic and I came across yours. I NEVER use to read other fanfics that aren't Nick as the main guy, but then when I saw yours I'm gald I did.

I lurveeeeee H&K! :D MY. FAVOURITE. FANFIC. EVER.

& I liked S&S but, to be honest there was some parts that bored me (the fillers).

Nonetheless, I'm gunna miss S&S and H&K like crazyyy :( You're a great writer :D

ohmygahh
its over,
it was amazing!
i never commented your stories just because im too lazy too, but i have sticks and stones favorited on my computer,
i hope any future one shots kick ass or that you start a new story

so i havent read the last chapter yet or reviewed lately and i'm sorry but i saw this and had to show you. ;D -

if you can see this -
http://www.new.facebook.com/photo.php?pid=1327804&o=all&op=1&view=all&subj=26144673317&aid=-1&id=556626981&oid=26144673317#/photo.php?pid=1327774&o=all&op=1&view=all&subj=26144673317&aid=-1&id=556626981&oid=26144673317

or
http://photos-g.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-snc1/v320/35/15/556626981/n556626981_1327774_7090.jpg


if you cant see either of those tell me.
i just thought that was cool.

i have a very important question;

are you going to do one of those time-skip things?
like a year ahead to Evie and Nick on New Year's?
you reallyreally should.
:]

haha, i have one planned out in my mind, but i think it'd be amazing if you wrote one.

I feel like I need to reread your stories because I'm going through withdrawals. *sigh*

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!
i cried at the ending. yes, i actually cried.
i love your stories... so much! you are SUCH a great writer. i know i've said this before, but it's so true.

you ended sticks and stones perfectly! wow, i seriously can't get over how awesome you are. woot! i love it, i love it, i love ittt!!!

wow okay, sorry for the weirdness of this comment xD

OK, I know a billion people have / going to ask you, if you will be doing any future one shots, BUT...


..Are you going to be doing any future oneshots? LOL. Mainly, Jalex. And maybe even a small aspect of Evie and Nick? OK I'm srry for asking, but I don't wanna get my hopes up or anything..I wanna be sure:)

ANYWAY. Another note, I'm sure you already know that your story is amazing... and that I think so, so...
Well, I'm glad about the way youy wrapped things up. And I agree with you about the Jalex thing, and about how Nick and Evie would be better off as friends. As sad as it is.. :(


Soo.. I'm sad that it's over now:( But I'll definitely look out for new fics from you ;) :):)

your stories were truly amazing....

wow your stories are really amazing. it's funny because the things that nick does in the story, some of the stuff he actually does in reality. you did a really amazing job. I can't wait till you post your next story! how long have you been writing for?

i love you! and your stories!

Okay, I justtt read your note. And I think that you're right in not wanting to drag out the story....UNLIKE MY SISTER....*cough* *cough* ehem...

LOL. =D

haha, my sister was saying how you should fast-forward like 2 years or something...but then again...what does SHE know??? lol, JK, JK! haha, idk.....but then, fast-forwarding it might ruin the whole, imagining the future for yourself, thing....but yup. My sister thinks that you should make anotherrrrrr story about Evie/Jordan/Nick...but I completely disagree. She forced me to tell you, so yeah....maybe you could have a new completely different story about Nick/some othergirl/and another girl?? like a love triangle.

alrighty................that's all for now. =D

AMAZING that was so good a perfect ed to the story i think without the epilogue i would ahve been thinking so much about what would ahppen to the characters but i;m glad that kevin talked ot dash in the end their love sotry was really good in the stroy and how kevin is her best friend but now shes kevins best friend is great too cause it just completes the circle in thier relationship and evie and joe i think its good how they're "friends" now but at the end they still didn't hug properly cause if they became like extrmemely close it would justs be wird and OMG JALEX i read your note and i think its true that evie and nick were there to bring jalex together cause its easy to put two people together but when you put two opposites together and try to explain how they love each other its amazing like when she was lsting the reasns she loves him...i dunno i think they match because they comlete each other and finally i think the relationship between nick and evie was a perfect end them coming together at the end o do the thing they both loved to do and she oculd finally hear the music inside her and i love that elton john song i even have the mouli rouge version of it and elton johns version with billy joel ahha i'm just a sucker for it but yea i thought that him saying maybe one day was great but evies reply was kind of creepy haha and when he was uncomfertable i was feeling awkward for him but when she said i'll keep waiting i was just like awwwww....i think the flashback was a great addition but yea overall BEYOND BRILLIANT STORY and great ending i hate bad endings but this one makes you think but still seems like it could go either way...oh i almost forgot the jordan thing was great cause it completed eveis transformation which shows what she has become is what she is goign to be but yea GREAT STORy again and i'll be waiting for the next thanks for the hours of great fanfiction you've given me :)