I would love it. :) I want to be an author, and though that story definitely won't be one of my published works, it's nice to know what people think of it. And the good thing is if it sucks that's alright because I wrote it a year ago. If you'd like to read something I've more recently written, check out Things Of Fiction. :)
Thank you much for your comment. :) I wrote the story last year though, and I had no clue what I was talking about half the time. But I appreciate that...thank you much, I'm glad you enjoy the story so far. :]
Thanks so much for your comment. It's so much more helpful to get constructive criticism than just 'it was awesome!' (though I like those comments too :P).
I'm glad you liked it, though, so thanks :D
Hi :]
Just thought I'd let you know in case you didn't see it, but in my contest for "What Was Supposed To Be The Best Day Ever" you came in third place. :D
I just need you to pick a prize. :D