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...I'm just self-conscious and shit about my work.
It's pretty sad, but thanks again.

Thank you for commenting my poem.
As stupid as this sounds, it means a lot to me. XD

Thanks for reading my poem. :)

kk thank you

thx for the jnl comment.
never heard of them. any good?

thanks and thanks for the heads up on the typo

thats fine, ill make sure that ill read them

thank you and i am interested, your stories seem really good when i have a chance to read them i definately will.

no prob :)

So I changed it, lol!

I agree. I think that it seems a bit off because it looks so weird written, and it should probably say "Then I" instead of "I then." But when I read it outloud, I think it sounds better the way it was written than if I were to change it. Thanks for the comment though! It's refreshing to receive some real criticism!

No problem m'dear. I do what I can. ;]

yup, yup. =]

No problem dear, which ones would you like me to read?

Sure! I'll critique your stories!

Um, chick? I know people who have access to nice clothes, but they want to complain about their looks for attention, thus wallow in self-pity. That doesn't "limit" perceptions" on anything. My journal was for girls who actually try to look as good as they can, but still don't get deemed pretty because of whatever reason. They don't fit society's mold, and so are basically ostracized for it.

Some people really do have a hard time finding clothe sthat look good on them. Their size or coloring might make that difficult for them. Sure, some people could make themselves look nicer, but would rather wallow in their self-pity. But most girls either can't find or can't afford clothing that emphasizes their good features or that are comfortable.

Thanks for the comment on my poem :)

Eh.
I know.
Sorry

Thanks for the poem comment.
I know I felt like I didnt like the poem as much as the original version.
But the original version on the story is a bit more complicated and you need to read between the lines so I tried to make the same poem but with words people could understand.
I guess I didn't do a good job though. >.<