Thank you for the story comment x) and yeah i can move it :) i was just messing around with the layout to see what would work or not. But again thank you, and Im working on the first chapter right now, just having a little difficulty working the lyrics into the story x) haha but i'll try to update as soon as possible :)
hey!! thank you so, so much for commenting. I really appreciate it!! :) and the way I am writing this is actually inspired on another user's story. It's called Bits and Pieces by Grace Dunne. It's a very good story. and well, I hope I get to see more comments from you whenever I update. And again, thank you!! :D
Thanks for the comment on the story(: In regards towards a point in your comment, The characters are going to develop further as the story goes on. But it was still the first chapter, and I didn't want to go too in depth just yet.
Thank you for helping me out, sadly I didn't make the layout so I can't change anything because there is nothing under Story layouts. Hopefully, it's not that important. Thank you then!
I don't read it just because, for me, it kind of ruins the original story. I know for some people it's like their extension of it when they can't get enough, but I read it and I'm like, 'NO, that's not how it goes in the book/movie/TV show/video game!'
But my issues with fanfiction about real people stretches into a whole different realm and not only do I not prefer it, I just feel uncomfortable reading it.
Thanks a lot for the critique on Conjure, it was very much appreciated! Unfortunatley, I don't know very much about story layouts so I don't think I can make the font size larger, perhaps it might help if you zoomed in? I dunno another solution. And thanks for the tip of putting full stops, although I think I did for every sentence, however I may have missed some that I can't see (where is it?) Again, thanks a lot for the comment! And if you were the subscriber than double thanks!