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  • josten.

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    Thanks so much for the comment on my story. Ah, I know the fonts a bit small I'm making it bigger right now. Thanks for the tip!
    June 6th, 2012 at 09:05pm
  • RavenClaw_Keeper

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    Thank you for the story comment x) and yeah i can move it :) i was just messing around with the layout to see what would work or not. But again thank you, and Im working on the first chapter right now, just having a little difficulty working the lyrics into the story x) haha but i'll try to update as soon as possible :)
    June 6th, 2012 at 04:10am
  • orange county.

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    No problem Cute It was a really enjoyable read.
    June 5th, 2012 at 03:54pm
  • butterflywings16

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    Thanks so much for your comment, it means a lot for me since its my first ever co write!!! (:
    June 5th, 2012 at 04:31am
  • INACTIVExx

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    hey!! thank you so, so much for commenting. I really appreciate it!! :) and the way I am writing this is actually inspired on another user's story. It's called Bits and Pieces by Grace Dunne. It's a very good story. and well, I hope I get to see more comments from you whenever I update. And again, thank you!! :D
    June 1st, 2012 at 08:55pm
  • Corrupt.

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    Thanks for the comment on the story(: In regards towards a point in your comment, The characters are going to develop further as the story goes on. But it was still the first chapter, and I didn't want to go too in depth just yet.

    Happy Mibba-ing!
    May 2nd, 2012 at 01:51pm
  • H0UDINI.

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    You're welcome. :)
    March 20th, 2012 at 04:43pm
  • paracosm.

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    Your welciome, it was my pleasure :)
    March 18th, 2012 at 06:52pm
  • Mutant9568

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    Thanks for your support :D I really appreciate it :D
    March 15th, 2012 at 01:46am
  • H0UDINI.

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    How would I do that?
    March 12th, 2012 at 12:35pm
  • H0UDINI.

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    You're welcome.
    I really liked it. :)
    March 12th, 2012 at 04:53am
  • Vineirys

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    This is for you. Cute guy, right?

    http://cdn.iwastesomuchtime.com/January-26-2012-23-27-21-psycho.gif
    March 11th, 2012 at 04:33pm
  • Karina_DeLun

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    You're welcome, yea the dark tone is great you should hurry up and get published so I can get all your work.
    March 9th, 2012 at 07:02am
  • fait accompli

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    Thank you for helping me out, sadly I didn't make the layout so I can't change anything because there is nothing under Story layouts. Hopefully, it's not that important. Thank you then!
    March 8th, 2012 at 09:28pm
  • AmorarEsDeVivir

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    I don't read it just because, for me, it kind of ruins the original story. I know for some people it's like their extension of it when they can't get enough, but I read it and I'm like, 'NO, that's not how it goes in the book/movie/TV show/video game!'

    But my issues with fanfiction about real people stretches into a whole different realm and not only do I not prefer it, I just feel uncomfortable reading it.
    March 8th, 2012 at 09:08pm
  • fait accompli

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    Thanks a lot for the critique on Conjure, it was very much appreciated! Unfortunatley, I don't know very much about story layouts so I don't think I can make the font size larger, perhaps it might help if you zoomed in? I dunno another solution. And thanks for the tip of putting full stops, although I think I did for every sentence, however I may have missed some that I can't see (where is it?) Again, thanks a lot for the comment! And if you were the subscriber than double thanks!
    March 8th, 2012 at 09:07pm
  • carpe diem;

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    Hey! thank you for the review. I'll get right on it.
    To be honest, I felt like the fight wasn't long enough too.
    So, again, thank you! :)
    March 7th, 2012 at 11:10am
  • Vineirys

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    BROKE 500 READERS BITCHES.

    .... ahem. Well, anyways.
    March 3rd, 2012 at 10:12pm
  • Vineirys

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    What can I say? I just have a kind of charm that pushes men to desperate measures.
    March 3rd, 2012 at 08:03am
  • Vineirys

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    So.... Skype.
    March 2nd, 2012 at 06:25pm