Thank you for the advice on my story (The Crooked Finger). When I type it up in a Word document, the dialogue is on a new line, but I will try to fix this.
Thanks for your input on my story, The Beads of Light (Feb., 17 2012). I'll look into getting a background. I don't really know which ones are the best looking, but I'll figure something out. =) Thanks again!
Thanks so much for commenting on After the World's End! You've given me a lot to think about and I agree with you on needing to make my characters do more instead of just saying things about them. You pointed out a lot of things I hadn't noticed before, so thank you for taking the time to leave such a great comment.
And I actually thought this was quite good. :P I'm too busy trying to catch the falling ideas of my own novel to nit-pick at yours. I'll get back to my usual nit-picking after I get over my writer's block.