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  • helloblues

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    Hello and thank you very much for your comment on Summer Skin, I'm very grateful for the feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying the story! :)
    February 20th, 2012 at 12:40am
  • EvenSong

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    Oh yeah, it was perfectly understandable! Very, very good!
    February 19th, 2012 at 09:24pm
  • Vineirys

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    I swear better than you do? Well damn.

    And that's a fucking cute lizard.
    February 19th, 2012 at 07:06pm
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    http://blog.lib.umn.edu/kolo0052/architecture/sqaw_lake_fire.gif

    Happy birthday.
    February 19th, 2012 at 01:39am
  • Vineirys

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    Search cinemagraph on google. Or GIF.
    February 19th, 2012 at 01:30am
  • Vineirys

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    It's cool, I got what you meant. I was just as pumped when I saw it moving. I changed it to a better working picture, but it still moves!
    February 19th, 2012 at 01:17am
  • Vineirys

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    I wondered who would be the first person to comment on the new layout. :P Yeah, moves.
    February 19th, 2012 at 12:35am
  • EvenSong

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    You are most welcome!
    February 18th, 2012 at 04:52am
  • runningtomidnight

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    Thank you for the advice on my story (The Crooked Finger). When I type it up in a Word document, the dialogue is on a new line, but I will try to fix this.
    February 17th, 2012 at 07:29pm
  • Cheezeburger

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    Hm, I disagree. The font size should be fine where it is now, I think. Thanks for your input though, it is much appreciated. =)
    February 17th, 2012 at 01:36pm
  • Cheezeburger

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    Thanks, I'll look into it. =)
    February 17th, 2012 at 03:01am
  • Cheezeburger

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    Thanks for your input on my story, The Beads of Light (Feb., 17 2012). I'll look into getting a background. I don't really know which ones are the best looking, but I'll figure something out. =) Thanks again!
    February 17th, 2012 at 02:53am
  • May Lewis

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    Thanks so much for commenting on After the World's End! You've given me a lot to think about and I agree with you on needing to make my characters do more instead of just saying things about them. You pointed out a lot of things I hadn't noticed before, so thank you for taking the time to leave such a great comment.
    February 14th, 2012 at 11:59pm
  • PeachCoco

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    Thanks for the help and advice!
    February 14th, 2012 at 07:08pm
  • Vineirys

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    ALEX ALEX ALEX I CAN SEE THE WORDS AGAIN.

    My imaginary friends are speaking to me. :)
    February 14th, 2012 at 05:13pm
  • Vineirys

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    FUCK YES TEN STARS BITCHES.
    February 14th, 2012 at 04:38pm
  • Vineirys

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    I dunno man. Stalkers are real.
    I know. I thought they were a myth, too.
    Be warned. Lock your doors.
    Tell your friends.
    Be armed.
    February 14th, 2012 at 04:23am
  • Vineirys

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    Hey, in the meantime I'm getting in an entry of PoG before someone throws a pipe bomb through my window.
    February 14th, 2012 at 02:31am
  • Vineirys

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    And I actually thought this was quite good. :P I'm too busy trying to catch the falling ideas of my own novel to nit-pick at yours. I'll get back to my usual nit-picking after I get over my writer's block.
    February 14th, 2012 at 02:19am
  • EvenSong

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    Which I think is funny, because I'm the exact opposite! For some reason, I have trouble describing everything else, but the characters!
    February 13th, 2012 at 05:52am