Advice taken. *posts comment on your profile* So, it's fine if you're bossy. I live for constructive criticism, so feel free to boss me off the egde of the earth!
So what should happen next in the story, which I think I'm gonna call "Salute Me, Traitor!"? I really need some help with it... and do you like my title idea or no?
Thank you for commenting on Chasing Imagination!
I appreciate your advise, although to be honest, there are a lot of characters who I've never thought of as punky - I always pictured Matt as quite a preppy guy, although maybe that didn't come across so much in the actual story. Felix, Jay and Wolfie, imo, are all kind of...normal too, I guess - definitely not punky. But like I said, maybe that hasn't come across in the writing as well as I'd hoped. :D