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  • freckles.

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    The chicken was perfect and tied everything together with a delicate red ribbon. I like how you made the boy sound awkward and normal like it could have been anyone in real life. It makes it so much more tangible. And I love that she loved him even though he had an awkwardness to him, and how she still loved him, til the end.

    The poem is so realistic. I wonder if you've been through and experience like this, but I'm too afraid to ask.

    A lovely poem. <3 Well done!
    January 21st, 2013 at 09:02pm
  • crying_for_COOKIES!

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    Wow... this is deeply touching, and so full of emotion. I'm kind of speechless... fantastic writing.
    March 18th, 2011 at 03:09am
  • Hyde

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    Amazing, one of the best I've read. It was written well,I could see and feel all the emotion. keep writing. :)
    August 8th, 2010 at 03:48am
  • lemonaid

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    awsome poem

    can u read mine? http://d2b513d2.qvvo.com/
    August 6th, 2010 at 02:13am
  • StarlightXStarbright

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    It was deep and inspiring and sad. All the perfect things for a poem :) Gorgeous writing
    August 6th, 2010 at 01:43am
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