Passion at the Corner of Roanoke and Joyner. - Comments

Poetry used to be my forte but right now I'm stuck with all the crap in school.

But reading this really reminded me of how good a poem can get; how raw and deeply moving it can be. It was such a good poem!

Thanks...I'm a "grammar nazi" and I seemed to look this over :) Thank you!

This was so lovely!
It was full of emotion and I thought that it was very, very well written!
If I may, I feel that in the line, "For a even sorrier excuse of a man", it would flow more smoothly if it were, "For an even sorrier excuse of a man." Of course, this is all only my opinion. (:
I think that my favorite stanza was, "Think about how we used to talk.
The way I would catch your smile in the halls.
Do you remember those moonlight nights?
How we gazed at the stars from your Drapery Falls..."
I just loved this poem so much! Great job on this!

I absolutely love this, I think you did a great job on your poetry and it's very well written.

Wow!! This is amazing its written so amazingly .. keep it up