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  • strawberrylegs

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    @ fala amo.
    Hellbent on positivity is my goal in life. I'm relieved it was translated through this c: Thank you lots for the feedback, dear!
    April 12th, 2019 at 02:02am
  • lonely girl.

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    if is one of my least favourite words in the English language, just because of the uncertainty it poses. Which is, of course, the point of it. I like that even though your poem hinges on the uncertainty, the narrator is hellbent on being positive and making sure that if it does happen, they will make it work for them.
    April 11th, 2019 at 04:45pm
  • strawberrylegs

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    @ sebastian michaelis.
    oh my god thank you so much for the feedback, dear. <3 I'm happy it resonated with you!
    Maybe one day I'll be able to write a follow-up, void of the doubt in the background. Fingers crossed.
    April 2nd, 2019 at 03:17am
  • edward midford.

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    I loved the use of repetition in the poem. In Love Reading it, I could feel a sense of hope but also a sense of doubt in the end. It was short but very touching!
    April 2nd, 2019 at 12:58am
  • Jooombiiine

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    @ strawberrylegs
    You are literally so welcome! I appreciate all the feedback you've been giving, as well! Cute I really like your poems too, so I look forward to reading more! I read them to my mom and she thinks they're beautiful. Loooove the way your heart/mind writes! In Love
    March 26th, 2019 at 06:37am
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    @ Jooombiiine
    You're seriously the sweetest person ever. Thank you for all the feedback you've been giving Arms
    March 26th, 2019 at 06:07am
  • Jooombiiine

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    I really like this. This touched me and I felt it, girl.
    March 26th, 2019 at 05:49am