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JHUZE
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omg thats so sad :'(
September 5th, 2008 at 01:28am
MissMagnoliaWebber
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I love this!-- your rhyming is superb and you can tell there's quite a bit of emotion in this piece-- the one thing I would work on would be setting up a sense of metre-- one of my own struggles-- I admit. Keep Writing though.
~Maggie
September 5th, 2008 at 01:27am
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