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  • IWillMakeYouScream

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    I really love this story and in my opinion, it is (without a doubt) one of the best stories on this website. Sometimes it's pretty hard to find a really good story that's good to the point that it makes you feel what the characters are feeling and haves you hanging on every word written, making you want more. Thank you for writting this, I cannot wait till the next chappy Love ;)
    March 31st, 2010 at 05:21am
  • Loopy-Lizzie-

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    They're getting married!

    Whooo!

    Kicking Dance Punk

    I love this story!!

    I hope there's more soon!

    Wow
    November 4th, 2009 at 12:04am
  • Lishness

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    Awww cute!! :P
    Awesome update!! :D
    more soonish?
    November 2nd, 2009 at 07:19pm
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    Fanntastic, amazing, and unexpected as usual. You're so amazing. :)
    November 1st, 2009 at 04:42pm
  • OhMyGoshh

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    I just read the first chapter
    The hots for a teacher(; hah
    I love it<3
    November 1st, 2009 at 02:25pm
  • Tattoo

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    I just came across this story yesterday, and am finally all caught up.
    I really like this story so far =D
    It's adorable how lovey-dovey Frank and Bob are with each other ;D
    I can't wait for the next update!
    August 4th, 2009 at 05:03am
  • Angelus.

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    Oh wow...
    Firstly, WOO, YOU UPDATED! :D This makes me insanely happy. Dance

    Secondly, wow.. I love this story, so much. That chapter was great, I can't wait for more!
    August 3rd, 2009 at 06:38am
  • Alice Verney

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    yay you updated and damn i hope bob feels better
    August 3rd, 2009 at 02:54am
  • AnUndefinedRomance

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    Sigh. We all love Bob very much, and I'm sure a few of your readers will back me up when I say that we love every single update, too! ;D
    August 3rd, 2009 at 02:11am
  • frank turner.

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    In Love That was one of the cutest updates, honestly it was. Bob made me laugh a fair bit, hehe. :mrgreen:

    August 2nd, 2009 at 07:06pm
  • Psyche Adrenaline

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    I got a ded! Dance
    That chapter was adorable and totally not that short. I'm doing far worse than you on the shortness level. Wink Anyway, your writing always amazes me, and I totally wish I had your skill. How long will it be until Frank turns 18?

    Oh, and I'm totally going to update a story of your choice in honor of the dedication.
    August 2nd, 2009 at 04:40pm
  • Lishness

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    Awesomeness update :D
    August 2nd, 2009 at 04:30pm
  • Rian Dawson

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    I'm so sorry it took so long. Sad

    I really did love it. =] I think you're going to make slash my guilty pleasure. ;]

    And the post in the pimping and reccing thread has been... well, posted.

    You're an amazing writer. =]
    July 28th, 2009 at 08:01pm
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    Chapter 7: I've Become So Numb

    That was such an adorable chapter.

    They finally admitted their love for each other.

    Lol.

    I though they never would.

    But that dream...:tehe:

    Wow.

    Even better then the last.

    Lol.

    But it seems as though the closer Frank is growing towards Mr. Bryar he is growing even further away from Mikey.Sorry

    That's sad, they were best friends, until Mr. Bryar came into the picture.:|

    Oh well, it is for love after all.In Love

    Lol.
    April 28th, 2009 at 02:29am
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    Chapter 6: It Started Out With A Kiss

    That is definitely the perfect title for it.

    I would definitely be shocked, but regret it or get upset over it?

    Never. :lmfao

    How could you?

    It's some hot new teacher who just happens to kiss you.

    I would at first be shocked but blame him for being late to some boring class.

    Pssh...If you don't want him, I'll have him!

    Lol.

    I feel sorry for him that he is taking that all out on his diet.

    By starving himself,Bob Mr. Bryar should have apologized, as it was his fault. Disgust

    But he can't really have any saying in it, if Frank won't even look at him, let alone even think/speak/hear him out.

    Poor Frankie.
    Cry
    April 26th, 2009 at 02:23pm
  • frank turner.

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    In Love <333333333333333333
    This story is so cute and amazing and ahhh! I love it. And I actually really can't think of a decent comment about the actual chapter... I'm tired. :tehe: >.<

    April 25th, 2009 at 09:38pm
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    Chapter 5: Dream Until Your Dreams Come True.

    By the way the tittle sounds, I'm guessing it will happen soon, very soon.

    *giggles*

    The start of the chapter was....Wow....Just wow.

    Very...Hot.

    But I expected it to happen soon, with the amount of times Frank is thinking about Bob, I knew it wouldn't be too long before he was dreaming about him.Naughty

    Though I never expected it to be in a very...hot, sexual way.:tehe:

    Lol.

    But I do prefer it this way.

    If I were to have walked past after having that dream I would have either giggled, and look up at him to see him with a mix of a wtf look and a apologetic look. :lmfao

    But The Catcher In The Rye to me wasn't as I had expected it to be, I just found it not the type of book I would read.

    However, I have to agree books/stories do give you the opportunity to slip off into another world.

    Comparing the very hot, steamy, sexual dream to being kicked in the groin and punched is definitely better then going through that sort of pain.
    April 25th, 2009 at 12:45pm
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    Chapter 4: The Only Way To Win Is To Lose.

    F+B=<3

    Awww....How cute, it seems as if they have already begun their relationship but are just in a fight at the moment! :cute:

    Lol.

    Te quiero. = I love you.

    I can't wait to hear Frank say that to Bob, on a romantic date during dinner, whilst they are just staring into each other's eyes. In Love

    That would be the perfect way to top off the night, by saying I love you in another language, it would prove then that Frank actually does pay attention in class. :tehe:

    Lol.

    And I think I have a good idea of why Frank is eating chocolate just after the previous events.

    He misses his Bobbles.

    Lol.

    If his mum were to know him like a real son, she would've guessed that he was gay, but she chose to listen to his lies instead.
    April 25th, 2009 at 12:35pm
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    Chapter 3: Please Don't Talk Too Much Baby,

    Do I sense jealousy? Naughty

    The way Mr. Bryar was looking at Mikey after greeting Frankie, sounded a bit like jealousy.

    Lol.

    But the again it sounded a bit like he was homophobic.

    But I have to agree with the jealousy side of things.

    If a teacher were to randomly ask if I were gay, I would be pretty upset too.

    It's probably because of the way he said it?...I don't know, if he were to say it casually - and even though I am not a guy - it still would hurt.

    Because he was already beginning to feel a little something, something for him.

    The last sentece I found touching, because to me it already seemed as if their friend/relationship was beginning to grow.

    Bob was caring for Frank, whilst Frank was having troubles/doubts.

    Lol.

    That made no sense what-so-ever.

    Hahaha.
    April 25th, 2009 at 12:24pm
  • dancingwithmydemons;

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    Chapter 2:Coming Out of My Cage.

    Oooh...Teacher swore!

    Lol.

    I would love to be able to have a lip-ring in and not get in trouble.

    But Bob is able to get away with anything.

    The way Bob was talking about teachers in this bit:
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    “I know what you mean. My name’s Robert but everyone has always called me Bob, except for all the old mossy High School teachers. Even now that I’m a teacher, some old people keep calling me Robert.” He shook his head.
    I couldn't help but think, aren't you a teacher too?

    And what would make you want to be a teacher if you had been treated like that in school.

    Lol.

    Isn't ironic that they both have a birthday on a special occasion?

    Halloween and New Year's Eve.

    He should have just letBob Mr. Bryar get his keys out of his pocket.

    Then all of the fun would have begun!

    Lol.

    And I loved how you finished of the chapter, talking about all of Frank's crushes and the last sentence!
    April 25th, 2009 at 11:55am