Oh my God, Erika! Way to make me have a fucking heart attack!
Anywho, aside from the near trip to the emergency room for me, that chapter was great. I'm glad that they're really starting to see the dangers that them being together could cause at a deeper level--It didn't seem like they were taking it quite as seriously before.
So, my internet has been snuffing up lately and it takes forever to get on the message boards for Mibba, so I haven't been commenting any of your one-shots. Just know that I read them all and enjoyed them. I'll try to actually leave comments worth something on the comment page when I get the chance.
Aw I was so happy when I got the update email =D That was such a great chapter! You really had me fooled - I felt like crying! But then it was all a dreeeam. =)))
I'm sorry I haven't commented in so long! I haven't been getting update emails eventhough I'm subscribed! I was so sad because I thought you weren't updating but I checked it to make sure yesterday and I saw that the 20 something chapters had gone up to 50 something! Stupid subscription emails.
It's still as amazing as ever and I can't wait for more. :D
I looooooooooved how this remained anonymous until the end of it. Just one 'Frank'. The descriptions here felt so real.... and the occasional whispered words were input just in the right places. I also like the way you let us know that they know they can't just run away like that. It's not real life. And I adore it when plots are realistic. :]