If You Get To Heaven. - Comments

Because I missed out on commenting from the start I will do exactly that.

Chapter 1: In Your Eyes.

When Frank started perving on the new teacher, I couldn't help but laugh!

But I have to agree Bob's eyes are definitely the brightest blue.

Even though Mikey is having his suspicions about Frank being gay, Frank shouldn't have lied or disguised his lie upon another lie, because it's the easiest way to lose friends.

Hahaha.

But great start to the story! :D

Great update, I'm glad you're finally updating :)

next chapter soon please?

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woohoo that was an amazing update you long enough but i waited patiently go bob and frank

Awesome update!!! :D

Erika, I think I found some typos. Just so you know, here's my list :cute:
I fished my keyring with my car key and house key in out
Maybe, key in it?
a tray with food on in his hands
in OR on?
successfully grabbing it without moving to much
too much

Now, the real comment.
I never understood how water can have that effect, but it seemed wise to do as the beauty magazines suggested when it came to such things.
Frank sounds WAY to gay here :lmfao

Bob put on a film and got some snacks and candy
Don't you feel silly, and highly addicted to food, when you just had dinner and then have candy while sittting on the couch and watching movies? Haha, I do XD

My favorite part was the whole thing "Frankie, go to sleep", because it was cute and made me laugh. Plus, it's clearly who they are in here: two in-love boys who just care about one thing: being there for each other. Then, the whole 'five month celebration' was so cute. I didn't know people actually remember occasions like the first time they saw someone, but I guess that's what makes them so awesome together <3
Now that I think of it, and considering the whole thinking Frank did over there, about the pure romance I had always wanted and that now he had with Bob, I guess that it DOES make sense... if it is what I'm thinking. That early proposal you mentioned once?
Especially because Frank will be eighteen soon, if my math is correct, and they can actually be together, so I guess all those mentions of dreams and wishes, of the feelings he had and if Bob felt them in the same way, everything, it kinda fits. He's probably considering himself the situation of turning 18 and being 'legally adult' now, no? I guess it is somewhat implicit in his deep thoughts... even that he doesn't mention it, he definitely considers it, because people don't do that kind of thinking and reasoning if they're not sure about their feelings and their situation at the moment.

BUT, and I don't have an explanation for this, I had a weird feeling by readin the last lines:
Shifting a little, I snuggled in as close to Bob as possible, wrapping my arms around him, before falling asleep, reliving the happiest day of my life.
What if Frank let them be on the couch to not get out of the embrace he now needs so much, since they're so close of being officially together? Am I being too stupid by thinking that 'snuggling up as close as possible' was a very wise thing to do, before something gets Frank out of his favorite pair of arms? :think:

Aww, thank you, Erika. :arms: It's nice to be back to writing again, but there's still this writer's block cloud looming over my head...I need some serious inspiration.

But, commenting on the actual chapter--
That was beautiful! First off, I'm not happy with you for making me think all negatively, and then have it be a key to Bob's fucking apartment. However, I am happy that it wasn't bad.

I keep expecting that they'll get caught, but knowing your fluffy nature, I'm sincerely hoping that they don't. Plus, Frank's almost 18 at this point, right?

Anyway, as usual I was blown away and I can't wait for more. :arms:

Aw, that was such an adorable chapter

I really loved it, and I can't wait for more (:

OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG!

That was sooooo amazzing <333

More, please...? :D

xxxx

Hey, you?
The one that has a great story!?
Yeah, I demand an update on this! :D

And since you love me, you'll do it, right!?
<3

Hey, you?
The one that has a great story!?
Yeah, I demand an update on this! :D

And since you love me, you'll do it, right!?
<3

WHAT IS HE HOLDING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!?????????????????????????!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!?!

WHAT?!?!?!

=O
NOOO I hope it isn't anything bad! Bob wouldn't do anything mean

Gorgeous update :arms: Can't wait for more =D

loociel:

Loved it! But you have to update soon now because you left us hanging. :/

^^ *Nods vehemently*

Loved it! But you have to update soon now because you left us hanging. :/

Awesome update!! :D

Left us hanging, much?
But, it was an uber awesome chapter! :XD

ksdfjksfj I hate cliffhangers!!! New chapter really really really really really sooooon. :)

Double... :cheese:

I hate my computer... *groan*

Alright, I read this chapter and BAM!
I immediately hoped I hadn't done it :lmfao
Why?! That's simple... because of the cliffhanger! *groans*
Now, I hope it isn't what I am thinking... oh well, it probably isn't, because you never write what I think. And that's one good thing about your stories!

:arms:

Cliffhanger, muchh...?

OMG! That was amazzing <3

More, please...? :D

xoxo <3

So intense! I want to know what the hell Frank's reading...

That chapter was beautiful, m'dear. The part with the big fluffy towels made me chuckle. :tehe: I highly doubt that Bob's sneaking around and I'm sure it's just some stupid misconception of Frank's because Bob loves Frank too much to fuck around with him...But right now that's the only explaination.

Anyway, I can't wait for more...I basically explained everything else I was going to say in my message.