Second Heartbeat - Comments

haha That was freakn great! I would havebeen in that bathroom! lol.
Syn and Zacky wrestling shirtless? O.o I think I've died and gone to Bat Country! Yay! lol.
Haha There has to be mor eof thegame in thr next one. I want to know what Jimmy's was!

" Eventually Zacky and Syn would take off their shirts (I don’t quite understand that part myself, but I’m not complaining) and start to wrestle "

Thank you for that mental image. Seriously... *throws cookies to you*

Great chapter.. and I don't blame her for choosing Syn, coz damn.. haha. But i'd personally go for Johnny, if I had to choose between those three. haha. He's just too cute.

I hope there's more of the game in the next chapter! Maybe some crazy dares? :D

Awesome new chapter....please update soon!

awwwwwww
that was hot
^^paris hilton moment XD lol

great update =D

Nice! That was hot lol. God the thought of Zacky covered in whip cream Yummy! lol. OHH! The thought of Jimmy covered in whip cream! (sorry got a little distracted lol)

I just got done with a huge test and your updates were exactly what I needed!

Nicely done, Ms Plague! Seriously, very well written and descriptive :D It had a great balance of romance and passion, which makes for the best sex scenes, in my opinion.

I look forward to more about the blissfully happy couple :D

that was soooo cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
and i rly thought they were gonna get married x] lol
please update soon<3

aww that was such a cute chapter!! and you know what i had the idea he was going to do something from the past for her but not quite that lol andi did think they were going to get married a tiny bit lol but i loved it xD

Awwwwww.... so adorable.

They're moving in together.. that's so sweet. And yes, a proposal would've been way too much so soon = p They're an adorable little couple and I can't wait to read more =]

I love it! and you're welcome! lol.
OMG that would be like the best date ever! Oh! She gets to live with Zacky! She gets to see Zacky in just boxers! Better yet with nothing on!!! Lucky! lol

whooo!!! lol
wonder where they are going Xd

omfg!
please update soon =D
and y were u in the hospital?

Awesome chapter and can't wait for more. ^_^

Well, i'm guessing since they're all dressed up.. it has to be somewhere fancy. I agree that it could be some place from their past ^

Maybe a private dinner and show of some type? That would be sweet =]

Loved the chapter.. and that dress is hot! haha. Be lucky if they get where they're going before he tries to ravish her... haha

haha I'm the engergizer bunny! lol. thank you for putting me in here! lol.
Where are they going? Ohhh! They should go out to like a drive in or something where they went to school! That would be so sweet! Idk. I'm freakn hyper!

Haha that costume was hot lol.Haha that was a freakn great update lol.
Poor Raven Zacky wouldn't help her and then made her wear that!

Haha, not to sound like a guy... but that outfit was awesome! Personally, I wouldn't be caught dead in it... but she should've used it to her advantage... That boy would've been wrapped around her little finger if she could've faked a little confidence = p

Hahaha, the spatuala.. I've done exactly that before. And it is a good weapon! Makes for a good slapping tool = p

le gasp! that was a slutty costume. Anyways awesome chapter and please update soon!

aww poor rav =/
but atleat it wasnt that bad it could have been worse lol
lvoe this =]

sucks she had to wear that lol
update soon please =]