Second Heartbeat - Comments

Aww... that was mean. I'd hit on Johnny, no worries and I sure wouldn't need to be drunk!!

Hahaha.. nice way of waking him up. Definitely the quickest = p Though she's lucky he didn't jump up swinging... :D

I kind of wonder if she'll get jealous herself, seeing as girls throw themselves at Zack.. that would be interesting.

Love it! Can't wait for more :D

haha matt got lost =p
and damn was zacky jealous!!
lvoe this xd

haha
that was funny
XD
why is all the rum gone?! XD

“Why is all the rum gone?” Jimmy exclaimed, falling to his knees in mock horror. Or maybe he was really that drunk that he was actually that sad? I wouldn’t doubt either one.

ZOMG...that was such a captain jack sparrow moment XD! Anyways awesome chapter and please udpate soon!

haha I love that. Complete Johnny Depp moment! lol.
Uh oh! Raven better pray that Zacky never finds out. BMTH would be screwed!

Damn... She has the worst luck with the male species. Hopefully Zacky is okay with her flirting and such.

I think she was a little too okay with what he nearly did... I mean, I would've thought it would drag memories about her fathers actions to the surface and kind of make her emotional and her first concern would be wanting Zacky there.. not to comfort Oli.

But that's just my opinion. I still enjoyed it! =] I look forward to more!

Uh oh...where's zacky did he get jealous of all the flirting? Anyways awesome chapter and please update soon!

oh shit im surprised she forgave him...
lvoe this

OMG that was good! I thought she was gonna cheat at first, but then I wa slike nah she wouldn't would she?, but as I read I found my answer! lol.
I was like on the edge of my seat!
You're right. I don't think Oli could do somehting like.

Just so all you know (who ever read chapter 14) OLIVER SYKES IS NOT -repeat is not- a rapist! he was drunk and this is all fiction.

at least he stoped lol

Lol and how does Zacky feel about her fainting over Oli shirtless? Anyways awesome chapter and please update soon!

Great chapter =] The next chapter will be interesting... wonder if Zacky will get jealous that she's perving on Oliver = p

Haha, I still get that excited when I see my favourite band, even though i've seen them 8 times already.. haha.

Wow that concert sounded like it was a lot of fun! Oli is freakn hot! lol.
I cna't wait to find out what happens when she meets them!

awesome!!!
the concert sounded amazing!

Awesome chapter!!!!! XD. Anyways please update soon and haha stupid boys XD

omg!!! haha that was funny! i love jimmy =D lol
and have fun at the concert!!!
tell me wat happens when u come bak! =]

Omg that was funny! Jimmys like the guy from the adams family! Lurch! lol.
BMTH is an awesome band! I cna't wait to hear what happens!

hahah love how shes like kinda pissed to extremly happy lol
love this =p

Aww.. what a cute chapter. Jimmy is a nutcase. haha. But the best kind of nutcase...

Have a good time at your show! I haven't heard of them, personally, but i'll check them out, just for you = p