Second Heartbeat - Comments

Aww.. what a wonderful ending :D

The flashbacks were a very nice touch, it really summed up their entire relationship perfectly and reminded us of how they got to that point. And the wedding sounded just peferctly =)

These lines were my favourite:

I smiled back at my husband, letting him know that he was stuck with me forever. He winked at me, letting me know that he couldn’t be happier.

Because of the referance to him being her husband. It was adorable.

Wonderful story and great finish. Good job :D

aww that was really cute!
I loved the fact that she was remembering all the significant events she had with Zacky, that was really cute!
as much as I cant wait for the last chapter, I'm sad it's gonna be over! lol

aw i love the memories! totally made that chapter. it was nice to get a glimpse about them. I just about cried!

i'm :sad: that it's almost over though!

Ok, so I absolutely love all your stories but this is the best one yett!
That fight scene was ferrsherrly AWESOME!
And I can't wait for the wedding :D ZACKY and RAY!!!!
But poor Bri Bri Bear haha
He needs a girl better then Candy,
how come in like all stories, the girl named Candy is always the bitch..? haha But it's a cool name
ANYWAY!
This story kickks ass! and I love itt! :]

Do i really have to say
how much i love this story?
and how i think the fighting scene was the best scene EVER!!
and how much of a bitch Candy is?? and i have always really had this theory
about people named Candy which is that they are always or turn out to be bitches... but hey that's just my theory =]

okay i'm done with my rant... i think after this you should make a sequel
but with the sequel it should be more like a prequel where you tell the full story of Raven's life as a teenager and it would actually lead up to this story...

I don't know... i'm just throwing an idea out there =] i really enjoyed this story though!!!

oh-my-geeeeeze.
amazingness.
i cant wait for the next update.
i feel so bad for bri-bri bear. [[yes im keeping the nickname]]
annnnnnd
i cant wait for the wedding!

Aww... poor Johnny! Oh, and poor other boys...

Especially Brian. He deserves a girl who'll treat him right... obviously it's not her. Pretty heartless to dump while he's in hospital. As if he hasn't been through enough... but then again, why would you wanna stay with someone like that?

Now he can find himself a new girl! One that's worth his time :)

oh wowz... replacing brian with a girl.. hehehe.. slut is pathetic.. umm.. ouchies.. ppls are hurting.. injuries stuck.. but this story rules!

holy shit
dnt see them coming..lol
she found a better girl?? blah, at least brain isnt to upset lol

Yay! She's ok!
I'm with my twin on this one! She better not show up at the wedding!

I loved the update!!!

Raven totally should've kicked Candy's ass, but it's okay. Brian didn't need her skank ass anyway. lol.

loved the update!
glad Brian and Candy are over

Ohh brian, i will make all the pain go away dont you worry ;-) Damn psycho bitch Candy...

Holy freakin' crap! that was an intense fight and I'm glad she got her vengeance...stupid father and his stupid stupidness

I finally caught up! Holy Fucking Johnny Christ! WooHoo!!! lol.

I could comment on every chapter of this story, because it's that amazing, but I'm really, really sleepy.

So...

This story is AMAZING. Zacky and Raven are the bestest couple ever, I'm really glad Brian apologized, I'm wondering what's gonna happen now that her dad's dead, and Aiden is the most kick-ass person ever for attacking Raven's dad and sticking around.

Okay, I'm off to bed now. Talk to ya later!

Yay! He's dead. Finally.

No more worries about that filthy old bastard. Good stuff!

I hope all the boys are okay...

Look forward to more =)

I almost quit reading cause I thought you killed the guitar guy.
I'm glad I didn't though.
I really like this.

omg that was so good!!

Dude this was so fucking awesome!
Thank You so much this chapter had to be one of my favorites!
*Dances around in a circle sing "I got to kick his ass. I got to kick his ass"* Whoa!!!

so her dad is like dead?! =]