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  • RockOut

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    oo those girls def kicked his ass!!! thank the lord, but i hope she is ok, afterall she was stabbed!
    February 11th, 2009 at 04:35am
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    GET THE BASEBALL BATS!
    February 9th, 2009 at 10:08pm
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    ...holy shittaki mushrooms...

    her dad's back...
    February 9th, 2009 at 02:25pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    First of all, I loved this:

    “Something scary!” Johnny interjected. I swear it’s always the short ones that want to a scary one. Maybe it’s because they can fit into tiny places when the serial killers come…

    It made me laugh so hard. hahaha. And it's a good point... = p

    Second of all, I'm glad that Brian got to say his peace. It would've just eaten him up inside if he didnt tell her all that and although it doesn't change anything, it's still productive that he got it all out. =)

    Thirdly.. dad's back. Time to get that toaster ready! :D
    February 9th, 2009 at 10:32am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    omg cant wait to see what happens with her dad
    February 9th, 2009 at 06:21am
  • CheYenneDisAster

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    OH SHIT!
    Lol
    Now the fathers back and shits about to go down!
    Lol
    February 9th, 2009 at 03:39am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    Aww Poor Johnny lol. Dude I;m still reading this. I have another tab opened and I'm like on the floor laughing lol.
    Damn Jimmy nad his knowledge about my love of Heresy's and Almonds!
    Scary movies are the best! That's a good reason of why Short people love scary movies!
    Aww Bri was so sweet! Well you weren't supposed to leave Aiden, goober!
    Damn Can I kick her dad's ass? Please!
    February 9th, 2009 at 03:34am
  • nalajess

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    amazing as always!!!
    February 9th, 2009 at 03:28am
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    o damn
    idk wats going to happen
    i just hope evryone is going to be safe =/
    February 7th, 2009 at 07:53pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Well, the boys handled that quite well, I think. Though I must say that i'm surprised Val went quite willingly... I would've thought she might put up a fight and stick around. hahaha.

    Oh, and this:

    yeah, someone actually said yes to marrying the garden gnome!

    I'd marry him in a heartbeat! hahaha. He's adorable :)

    I'm glad Aiden was able to take her mind off it, even if only for a little while. It helps. I'm surprised she's not glued to Zacky's side... I fricken would be! hahaha.

    I honestly hope their father gets what's coming to him... and hard. haha.
    February 7th, 2009 at 11:38am
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    yay! new chapter!
    February 7th, 2009 at 08:26am
  • kimistry

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    Oh no! I'm still freaked out that they're alone!
    And you changed the layout! o: haha ^^
    February 7th, 2009 at 08:22am
  • Its_RobynXo

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    ahh I'm nervous about what's gonna happen next!!
    February 7th, 2009 at 07:02am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    OMG! He's a prick!
    Damn just the thought of Mat tlike that scares the fuck out of me!
    Haha Yeah if this was real life I'd try and make you forget about it even for the night!
    Aiden can make her forget about it for a while! lol. Haha I'm hyper! Hahahahahehe

    Ahh My Twinkie Tara! lol. Dude I don't even know what's gonna happen.
    February 7th, 2009 at 04:16am
  • bethlynBACKLASH

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    hmmm... this is a scary story... EEK!!!!!!!
    February 7th, 2009 at 02:48am
  • RockOut

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    uh-oh!!! well that is def not good!!!! zacky better protect her!
    February 5th, 2009 at 01:16am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Woo! I was right... sort of. hahaha.

    No woo for her father being out, though. That's not cool. Bastard should've stayed locked up like he was meant to. Well, maybe something big will go down and he'll get killed... Zacky can smack him over the back of the head with a bat. It'd be self-defense! hahaha.

    Looking forward to more!

    Oh, and their wedding colours sound great =)
    February 4th, 2009 at 03:55pm
  • HopelesslyInLove

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    omgie... yes, that was unexpected... more please!
    February 4th, 2009 at 08:08am
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    Okay well about the picture thing lol you will just have to go to my photobucket.
    http://s163.photobucket.com/albums/t298/RayEen/
    I'm 5ft 4in, Brown hair, Blue eyes. Need anything else like personality stuff just let me know.

    I love this story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Sorry I had to.:)
    February 4th, 2009 at 06:08am
  • ShaleseRayEen

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    Name: Katrina
    Age: What ever is easy just younger then the guys.
    Boyfriend: Um Zacky or Johnny
    Picture I will send through message.:)
    February 4th, 2009 at 05:40am