Second Heartbeat - Comments

That was hot.
But, someone caught them, didn't they?
Come on! You can tell me!
lmao.

That was hot.
But, someone caught them, didn't they?
Come on! You can tell me!
lmao.

oo those horny bitches forgot a condom!!! tsk tsk.

Bad Horny kids! They forgot to wrap his willy! lol.
That was hot! That whole chapter ruled!

How completely mortifying... that is something that would happen to me. Except i'd yell something about "learning to knock" before I flipped everyone off and made a run for my room. hahaha.

Hmm.. a club incident? I hope it's a good one. They've led very dramatic lives.. time for some happiness!

ohhh wonder what's gonna happen at the club....

That was fucking awesome! lol. Sounds like me when I have one too many sweets! lol.
I could so picture seeign the whole thin gin my head OMG That was great!
Sexy outfit!

ooh.. fun fun.. clubbing is awesomesaucetasterrifical

Woohoo! Everything is good...

I wanna see them get married! =) That's gonna be a cute wedding =)

aw that was so sweet!
I loved it!!

Ah-may-zing!
But where was the hot make up sex? Haha. Jk. Haha
But seriously, where is it?
Btw, they need to talk about the kiss, cause Zacky needs to know what's going on with Brian loving Raven, and why Raven did it.
Love you
More soon?

So. I feel uber special right now.
*big dorky grin*

omg
=']
there gonna get married! lol
and johnny as the ring berrer XD
lol
<33

Aww That was so sweet! Are they getting married before or after Aiden and Jimmy?
I say before! lol.
Haha Zacky'll look sexy in a tux!

YAY!
Now the need to explain themselves, be cute, and have hot make-up-sex! haha
More soon?

Ahhhh!

They're okay! Woohoo!

Okay, now we just need them to work out their problems and get better... then get married and live happily ever after!!

Btw, I hope Zacky gets the same speech Matt gave to Raven... coz he's just as bad! Naughty kids...

OMG I had tears in my eyes with this chapter!
Ahh!

aww so glad they're ok
cant wait for more!

Okay. You need to make sure neither of them die, so I can slap them about the head for resorting to suicide because of one stupid fucking mistake.

Yes, it would be absolutely awful to lose someone you deem your soulmate, but what the rest of you friends aka FAMILY?! That's fucked up...

Sorry, I have really big issues regarding people who resort to that... personal reasons.

Anyways, extremely well written, dear, as always. Definitely had my full attention for both chapters =)

Look forward to more.

Ummmmmmmm
So i've spent the past two days reading all the chapters.
And then I get to the last one.
And they're both half dead!!!
WTF?!?!?!!!
ME NO LIKEY.
ME NEEEEED UPDATE!