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  • Dancertastesyourpain

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    My heart hurts.
    This is amazing writing.
    And Romeo and Juliet is sucky. Romeo was flaky and stupid, and Juliet was young and had never felt lust or infatuation before.
    SAVE THEM!
    January 19th, 2009 at 08:42am
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    omgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomgomg

    please update soon
    January 19th, 2009 at 05:33am
  • DaniSayWhat?

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    that was a filler?! no, fillers are usually filled with random information to tie you over for the next one...

    that was a freakin' heartbreaker! dude!! they'd better not die or I will be highly upset...*nods*
    January 18th, 2009 at 11:47pm
  • kimistry

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    OMGSH! I wonder what will happen next!
    o:
    January 18th, 2009 at 11:10pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    love it
    cant wait for more
    January 18th, 2009 at 07:22pm
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    no!
    theyboth cant die!
    holy shit
    im trying not to cry cuz my mom is upstairs
    ='[

    please update soon!
    January 18th, 2009 at 05:02pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    omg you have to update again soon
    January 18th, 2009 at 02:15am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    OMG I was listening to I won't se eyou tonight right before I read this. It made it tha tmuch worse becuae now i'm like crying!
    They better not die! I will freakn bawl before I go and kill you! lol jk. Or maybe not!
    January 18th, 2009 at 12:35am
  • bellageller1

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    please tell me that is not the end :(
    January 18th, 2009 at 12:04am
  • Dancertastesyourpain

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    NOOOO!!!!!!!!
    Save them!
    January 17th, 2009 at 11:44pm
  • Dancertastesyourpain

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    EEEKKK!!!!!!!!
    If you don't update again soon, I may die!
    January 17th, 2009 at 08:21am
  • stallion.duck

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    Well, damn.
    lmao.
    That's all I can really say until THIS STORY IS UPDATED AGAIN.
    =D
    Happy writing!
    haha.
    January 17th, 2009 at 06:44am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    *Slaps Raven's forehead*

    Stupid girl! The first kiss, would've been explainable... but this one.. nope. She's dug herself a major hole now and I highly doubt she'll get out of it easily... if at all.
    January 16th, 2009 at 01:19pm
  • Its_RobynXo

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    omg poor Zacky
    Hopefully he wont call off the engagement!
    January 16th, 2009 at 12:03am
  • xxxJimmysullivanxx

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    Poor ray and Zakcy! I can't believe she kissed Brian though!
    I never thought she would have done that. they better get back together! I'll cry if they don't!
    January 15th, 2009 at 11:21pm
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    omg NO
    ='[

    poor zacky!

    and snow got in my converse today lol
    January 15th, 2009 at 11:10pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    She really needs to not be so hard on herself. I mean, it's not like she has feelings for Brian or she encouraged his behaviour. Yeah, she let him kiss her, but it's not like they slept together or hell, even made out for 20 minutes! It was a simple kiss, that she didnt even return. She just needs to stop worrying so much about shit.

    Of course, she needs to deal with Brian, make sure he's aware of the situation and knows exactly where he stands with her and that that wont change. But I'd assume telling Zacky will simply cause major problems in their friendship... it shouldnt affect his relationship with Raven. So really, in a way.. it's probably best they save him the hurt and trouble....

    Matt's a sweet brother. =) I'd say I'd like a brother like him (not that there's anything wrong with the one I have = p) but no... coz he's too sexy to be a brothe = p hahaha.
    January 15th, 2009 at 04:51pm
  • VengeanceIsMine

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    damns cant believe that happened!
    and wonder if she will stick through!
    January 15th, 2009 at 02:51am
  • jerseyxemoxgirl

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    omgomgomg
    i hope zacky wont be mad
    and i hope bri will understand!

    =]
    January 14th, 2009 at 10:17pm
  • bethlynBACKLASH

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    on noes.. i don't have a good feeling... something bad might be coming..
    January 14th, 2009 at 05:23am