Everytime I open up the link for this, I kind of have to sit there and stare at Ryan for a moment. He's pretty damn cute in that picture. :cute:
The jealousy that Ryan is feeling makes me smile, in a way. It's actually really cute for some reason. :D I love how it's Ryan feeling these things too, not Brendon because as I probably said before, the majority of the Rydon's I've read have Brendon falling in love with Ryan, not vice versa.
I'm excited to see where this goes next, especially since they're out of school now and will probably be spending even more time together.
I love how this chapter just started so randomly and out of the blue; it's really cute though, the closeness Brendon and Ryan shares. It kind of reminds me of how close me and Tricia are to be honest, although our relationship is strictly platonic.
Brendon is so smart... it's a nice change from most of the Rydon's I've read, where Ryan is the one that sounds ages older than he really is. It really does suit Brendon though, being all shy yet almost a genius, y'know?
And the jealousy moment at the end? Absolutely adorable, yet so hard hitting at the same time. It really shows just how it sometimes hits us before we even know what it is. I really love the Ryan you're building up in this story, he's turning into one of my favorite characters that you've written.