Daddy's Little Doll. - Comments

More please

YES!!!!!!!!! HE WINS!!!!! HAHAHAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Dad needs to die.
:)

Awwwhs how adorable. XD Okay sexy times now? No wait, have Marc kill her dad and then have them take Maybell and move to Canada. THEN have sexy times.

MORES!

well that was cute...totally not wat i was expecting...but it was cute

awe omg this is rly intense but it's an amazing story. I can't wait for you to update.

oohhhh....whats gonna happen?

More please.:) *Does cut little kid big begging eyes.)

Yes I like Marc better, and I really REALLY want to cut off the dad's balls with a toothpick or something. He sould just DIE!! Grrr....
Actually I hope she kiscks his ass and then marc kicks his ass almost to death.

marc needs to save herrr :/

There are a few literary errors, but other than that it's a very good read. I feel that everyone can relate to this story, in one way or another; I definitely know that I can.
(Write more scenes with Marc? ^^)

Best of luck and keep on writing.

ugh pleasee dont make her end up with dylannn for some reason i cant stand him haha

ugh
not dylan
id like her with him fyi
lol

NO SHE'S NOT READY!

Screw Dylan he's an idiot. Marc is sexy and off-limits which is even better. I hope he kicks her dad's ASS.

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hehe wow me like.
I want to kill the dad, if you can even call him that.
Can't wait for more so update soon please, well as soon as you have another one ready.:)

Woah...very intense story.

MORES! -Subscribes-

i like this.
Its amazing
I mean.. sad and the events are horrible
But its a very good story with a good plot.

man, if MY english teacher from last year did that, omg, i would be one happy camper!

hmm nurses office? kinky much haha jk

I can't wait to see whatll he'll do to her father once he finds out that's if he finds out.....

Very nice story.
Kudos to bringing your character seem super real.

yay !
her and marc
woot woot