Daddy's Little Doll. - Comments

cool update
cant wait for more

it was short....

-pokes computer- bad computer. wow...haven't used this to comment the story in awhile.

Oh I wonder if she's going to have a scandalous affair with marc http://www.mibba.com/data/board-smilies/icon_rolleyes.gif

I really like this story. But it makes me sad. I can really relate to Peyton and no story on Mibba has ever done that to me. My favorite parts in your story are whenever Maybell is in it and Marc too. Great update. Can't wait for more.

From Chapter 9, I really like the lines:

"Life is what you make it."
"Yeah, and skittles make real rainbows."

nice update. update soon.

lol, interesting reason for a computer to hate you but ok.

anyway, nice update

XxLithiumLilyxX:

dude, her teacher is beyond freaking me out.
I mean, seriously, what kind of teacher goes
"Huh, that one chick wasn't in class. Imma leave and go inside her house without permission to check up on her."

Freaky stalker status, dude.

Agreed.
Its really really good!

dude, her teacher is beyond freaking me out.
I mean, seriously, what kind of teacher goes
"Huh, that one chick wasn't in class. Imma leave and go inside her house without permission to check up on her."

Freaky stalker status, dude.

OMGEOHLAIGHLAIDHFLKASFJDSK!

what was that?!?! THAT WAS TERRIFIC!

update?

seriously, i want everything to work out well
for Peyton.

diamondsarentforever:

This story is amazing. Not like all the other stuff on Mibba, I could really see this as a book getting published.

Can't wait for more:)

they are so right, this is an amazing story that really has me thinking and wanting to read more.... please update soon!

this is a good story.
I love how its formatted.

This story is amazing. Not like all the other stuff on Mibba, I could really see this as a book getting published.

Can't wait for more:)

oh wow, i LOVE all ur stories so i could expect this was amazing.

this is great, and i think your awesome! =D
i feel bad for peyton, but hopefully marc is better for her. haha.

A love/hate relationship? Nice.
I just don't understand the teacher though.
Maybe because he reminds me of my seventh grade history teacher.
O_o

The violent side of my mind says that Peyton should totally just betchslap her father.
I have a feeling that won't work though =/

It seems Peyton may have feelings for her teacher? still kinda painful to read only because I understand what Peyton is going through. I hope her father stops doing thos awful things to her.

interesting story. can't wait to read the next.

When I read the sumnary, I almost cried. It's so sad. I can relate to Peyton.

I think that you should write a prequel, so you can give a more in-depth view of her childhood, meeting Dylan, etc. That was practically my first thought. I know it would just evoke so much emotion.

If I had written Peyton, I would have made her closed and reserved. In your story, though, she kind of acts out. She's so mean to her teacher; it kind of frustrates me. He seems to be nice.

Peyton is such a teenager. :lmfao I mean, you can tell. She's so stubborn.

Indeed, the story is intense. Good job.

cool story
Kinda sad at times but still really good