July 19th, 2015 at 06:53am
A Naked Light - Comments
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hm. So. You wanna update any time soon?May 6th, 2010 at 10:22pm
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Okay, so this needs to be updated, because I miss this story, so much.May 5th, 2010 at 04:44pm
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This is really really good.
Update?February 4th, 2010 at 08:18pm -
update, like, now.
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Please please please update~December 7th, 2009 at 07:31pm
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:) please update!!! pleaseeee :D :D :D this story is awesome and immediatley captured me in the first chapter. Check out my stories too!November 20th, 2009 at 01:38am
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Hey, that story is so amazing, I think you might remember me as Apple. But this is an amzing story and i'll nevre foget it :]October 29th, 2009 at 06:15am
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I love this story, update soon?October 20th, 2009 at 10:49pm
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Please please please please updateeee you left us with such a cliffhanger!!!October 10th, 2009 at 05:48am
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Hey there! I'm just dropping by because there haven't been any updates in a while and I love this story so much (and you're such a spectacular writer) so I thought I would just stop in and tell you that I really love this story and ask that if you get a chance that I (and I'm sure many other readers) would LOVE it if you updated! (PS: I don't want to come off as mean or anything, I'm sure you're very busy but I love this story and can't wait for more updates!)October 5th, 2009 at 07:14pm
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Updateeeeeeee.
I'm going to keep leaving you these comments until you do it.September 29th, 2009 at 07:32am -
Update! ):September 26th, 2009 at 04:37am
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love love! this story! update sooon! :DSeptember 23rd, 2009 at 01:59pm
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UPDATE, UPDATE, UPDATE! I love this! Lindsey should totally get her ass kicked to the curb!September 22nd, 2009 at 02:09am
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update soon? =/September 18th, 2009 at 08:31pm
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ahhh when are you going to update?!!?! I check this story literally like 5 times a day and there's nothing :( you left us with such a cliffhanger!!!! Pleaseeee update I <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 this story!!!! :)September 12th, 2009 at 01:58am
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S'good.
Even if it hasn't been updated in a while.September 4th, 2009 at 02:25am -
I love this story.
I love you for writing it.
That pretty much sums up everything I could say.August 26th, 2009 at 06:25am -
KSO.
I'm totally behind in comments.
And reading.
ugh.
but anyway.
.....her sister's a bitch.
and she's gonna be so pissed ^^
I love it.
<33August 25th, 2009 at 07:56am
Any skepticism I had with your writing with your other story... is definitely now disregarded after reading this one.
This is probably one of the greatest stories I have ever read. Not even finished, but even considering that... YES.
Holy crap. The love in this is real and it's got me feeling all types of things... happiness, sadness, anger at the fact that Addy's sister is just using Alex, WTF.
I'm so sad that this was never finished.
Like seriously, greatest story ever quite possibly. Like the thing that got me though was the dad talk in... chapter 11 I think it happened. Like even her dad realized how in love she was and I teared up at that part because I have never seen anything quite like that in a story. At least one of her parents would be approving of the changed situation. That is very enlightening. :)
This hasn't been updated for six years I am like sobbing because it is perfection and it probably will never be finished. :((
But in case you do find the inspiration to one day finish, I will be here to read. Doubtful, but... yeah.
And I couldn't not leave a comment on this because really it is perfection. I think maybe the POV is your strong suit, keeping it in first person, but switching between her and Alex is okay. The third person didn't really work out so well with the other story.
So yeah. I hope you're able to see this comment one day. :)