A Naked Light - Comments

roses are red,
violets are blue,
this story is awesome,
and so are you!

haha yeah, that was really lame. loved the update!

This is honestly the best Alex Gaskarth story I've ever read. Wow, just wow.

"Round up the guys, we've got a bitch to ditch."
favorite line right there.

i loved this. this whole story is so intense at times and its so well written. its just amazing

I dont know if I could love this story any more than I do right now.

Everytime I read this story, I manage to hate you a little bit more for being so freaking talented. I love the way you word things. The way you write your arguments, it puts my writing to shame, I swear.

The words dripped from his mouth like the bubbles of soap a mother might use to wash her son's mouth; filthily, involuntarily, savagely.

That line was epic. Loved it.

Oh my!
She can't force him to marry her! Bitch much?
I think this is about to get a lot more interesting. :]

Oh, I have a tiny confession to make. My job is really boring so I spend the majority of my time on Mibba reading every other story. Which means that I'm reading a ton of stories. Sooo, I was reading the latest update of this & I saw the name Skip & it didn't ring any bells. 8-]
So I'm going to re-read this story.
& btw I love your writing :]

"She won't get away with this," I promised her. "I won't let her, and neither will you." I wrapped both her hands with mine, bringing them to my chest. "I meant what I said last night. I was a drunken fuck-up, but I meant every word." My fingers reached for her face, tucking a tell-tale wave behind her ivory ear. "I'd give anything to take the words I gave Lindsey and give them to you. I promised her something you deserve," I sulked. "I promised her me, in all my entirety, and she wants my fame, my fortune; the things that don't matter nearly as much as I thought they did."

That was so beautiful and so well-written. What an intense chapter! But I loved every second of it. I love how there was a little twist in the plot, it makes me all the more excited for the next update. You have this notch with reeling someone in with just one chapter and having them addicted to the story. Like I said, amazing.

Wow. Just wow, that chapter was absolutely amazing. It was gripping from beginning to end, I think it's amazing how you can captivate people with your words and I certainly cannot wait for the next update! (:

yay for Alex's POV! :crazy:
The story's taking a serious twist now...I'm anxious to know what happens next. Update soon.

great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

plug-in-baby:

yay! i loved this chapter
and i cant wait to see how
it all works out! im glad that
alex and addy loveee each toher <3

yeah, what she said.

yay! i loved this chapter
and i cant wait to see how
it all works out! im glad that
alex and addy loveee each toher <3

A-M-A-ZING!!!
;O Kick her ass!!!!

^200th comment woo :)^

That was absolutely amazing!
I loved the whole chapter...
And the heated argument with Lindsey and Alex...
Wow. I had finished reading it quickly 'cause it was so good and I couldn't stop reading.
I'm disappointed in Skip, he seemed like a nice guy!
But this? No, he just couldn't take a hint.
Ha, Lindsey and Skip would make a great couple. :)

I can't wait to find out how they're gonna ditch the bitch haha.
Update soon please, I really enjoy reading this story :D
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please =]

I funking love this story. To like little bits and tiny pieces. Update again soooon?

You have to, like update :]

amazing. fucking amazing.
you're one hell of a writer.

Holy. Mother. Of. Pearl. You're amazing! And I love this story, one of my favorite Mibba ones, and that says a lot. You also should know, this was the first subscription on my list... 54 more to go *eyeroll. Lol, no caffiene yet, strangely enough. But this subscription will definitly stay on the subbie page. Update again soon!