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  • Melodramatic Fool

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    Yay, an update!
    That was absolutely incredible.
    I loved the daydream sequence, and all the little details throughout the chapter--heck, through the whole story so far--that made me picture everything vividly in my mind.
    You have some major skills. x)
    November 26th, 2007 at 12:20pm
  • Alice Verney

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    awwww poor mikey
    November 24th, 2007 at 09:12am
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    or not...
    keep it up, I like it:D:D
    November 24th, 2007 at 03:44am
  • Phantasmagoria.

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    GO EMMY!

    niceness
    you are an excellent writer:D
    and you have to make a new chapter!
    October 27th, 2007 at 02:16pm
  • Phantasmagoria.

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    beautifulness
    of course,its written by emmy so its good:)

    You have to update,its simply too good:D
    :D:D:D:D:D
    October 20th, 2007 at 10:57pm
  • Alice Verney

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    wow this is amazing update soon please!!!!!!!
    August 5th, 2007 at 09:06am
  • Beetlejuice

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    this. is. AMAZING<333
    July 6th, 2007 at 10:41pm
  • somuchforsecret

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    This is really good!
    Please update soon. <3

    Subscribed.
    June 22nd, 2007 at 03:43am
  • Sexie Pineapple xo

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    wow i really love this story.
    exspecially how you said that gerard came back to life when him and Mikey kissed.
    i really want to know what happens next.
    please update soon and let me know when you do :)
    June 19th, 2007 at 12:52am
  • ROCKY HORROR

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    i swear u better right more caue i fell in love with the story lol =3
    June 9th, 2007 at 01:02pm
  • mychemicalafixiation

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    Wow!!!! update as soon as possible
    June 6th, 2007 at 03:10pm
  • Coin-Operated Angel

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    Awww! They're together! ^___^ It's sooo sweet...
    More soon?
    June 5th, 2007 at 12:16am
  • Example001

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    Just read it in it's entirety. I'm in awe. Please update soon :P (Subscribing)
    June 4th, 2007 at 01:41pm
  • akasagarbha

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    I am extremely jealous of the way that you can describe things so clearly, and yet, with a poetic sense. Reading this story was very enjoyable for me. I usually hate Waycest, but this story is an exception. It's so well-written, and it's hard to believe that you're really twelve.

    Update when you can, hun, because this story is a phenomonon in the making.
    June 4th, 2007 at 05:06am
  • Daylight's Death

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    I FREAKING LOVE IT!!
    MAKE ME HAPPY AND UPDATE!!!
    June 4th, 2007 at 12:11am
  • My Chemical Romance

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    **new reader**

    oooooo suspense! lol
    this is really good, update soon!

    xoxo
    June 3rd, 2007 at 09:40pm
  • Bastard Son.

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    It's hard for me to stay objective, because I'm not a fan of Waycest, BUT I shall try.

    Overall, the story was great style-wise, the narration great and dynamic, the only thing I didn't like was the first chapter with the 'young man' parts. Sounds very unnatural and it just didn't do for me. Other than that, I have nothing else to say.

    There are some slip-ups, but you're a beginner as I've noticed so there's plenty of time to work on that. You definitely have some talent on your hands.
    June 3rd, 2007 at 11:50am
  • Pillow.Talk

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    Whoa!
    Go Mikey
    um yeah update soon
    June 2nd, 2007 at 10:58pm
  • i_love_rolo_cookies

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    this is good, keep it coming
    I'm glad they sorted it all out :D:D
    June 2nd, 2007 at 09:25pm
  • The Way

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    I love how Mikey initiates it... and the 'we're already accused' part.

    Lovely chapter.

    I'm in a hurry, so sorry about the sucky comment.

    BTW, read The Echo Never Fades by horsie890; I cried hard after I read it. Teehee.

    Update when you can... I also enjoyed talking with you and Shiemmy awhile ago. Haha.
    June 2nd, 2007 at 04:45pm
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