That's A Lie - Comments

Yay, an update!
That was absolutely incredible.
I loved the daydream sequence, and all the little details throughout the chapter--heck, through the whole story so far--that made me picture everything vividly in my mind.
You have some major skills. x)

awwww poor mikey

or not...
keep it up, I like it:D:D

GO EMMY!

niceness
you are an excellent writer:D
and you have to make a new chapter!

beautifulness
of course,its written by emmy so its good:)

You have to update,its simply too good:D
:D:D:D:D:D

wow this is amazing update soon please!!!!!!!

this. is. AMAZING<333

This is really good!
Please update soon. <3

Subscribed.

wow i really love this story.
exspecially how you said that gerard came back to life when him and Mikey kissed.
i really want to know what happens next.
please update soon and let me know when you do :)

i swear u better right more caue i fell in love with the story lol =3

Wow!!!! update as soon as possible

Awww! They're together! ^___^ It's sooo sweet...
More soon?

Just read it in it's entirety. I'm in awe. Please update soon :P (Subscribing)

I am extremely jealous of the way that you can describe things so clearly, and yet, with a poetic sense. Reading this story was very enjoyable for me. I usually hate Waycest, but this story is an exception. It's so well-written, and it's hard to believe that you're really twelve.

Update when you can, hun, because this story is a phenomonon in the making.

I FREAKING LOVE IT!!
MAKE ME HAPPY AND UPDATE!!!

**new reader**

oooooo suspense! lol
this is really good, update soon!

xoxo

It's hard for me to stay objective, because I'm not a fan of Waycest, BUT I shall try.

Overall, the story was great style-wise, the narration great and dynamic, the only thing I didn't like was the first chapter with the 'young man' parts. Sounds very unnatural and it just didn't do for me. Other than that, I have nothing else to say.

There are some slip-ups, but you're a beginner as I've noticed so there's plenty of time to work on that. You definitely have some talent on your hands.

Whoa!
Go Mikey
um yeah update soon

this is good, keep it coming
I'm glad they sorted it all out :D:D

I love how Mikey initiates it... and the 'we're already accused' part.

Lovely chapter.

I'm in a hurry, so sorry about the sucky comment.

BTW, read The Echo Never Fades by horsie890; I cried hard after I read it. Teehee.

Update when you can... I also enjoyed talking with you and Shiemmy awhile ago. Haha.