That's A Lie - Comments

Lovelovelovelove.

You write extremely well. I noticed that occaisionally you get a bit mixed up with tenses, but it's nothing huge.

xD

Love it.

Getting better and better KEEP GGOING =]

whooooo claimed page 3!

omg i fucking love this. please please please update!!!! wow.

OwO .. that was niiiice , emmy . :tehe:

i love drama ! whoooot !

update ?

:(

The thing that comes second in my hate list, next to Gee fighting Mikey, is Mikey fighting with Frank. I'm so, so sad now.

The writing itself has only a few glitches. Like the 'more than breathing,' you could have used another way to describe it, because it's sort of cliche. Other than that, I liked when Mikey said it aloud, and it sounded right. And how Frank was saying the same thing.

Things are so saaaaaad right now. Hope it gets better soon,

Update when you can. I'm stalking this fic. :D

morez peez??

Can you say amazing?
I fcking sure can. I love this story.
You have no idea.
I bow down at your all mightly writting skills.
More? Soon? Please?

=O
What a twisted little love triangle.

EMMY.
You made me cry. ;-;
I swear, my eyes watered up when Mikey and Frankie started arguing.

Well-written. Just... great.
It's beautiful. < 3
Update please? :3

war_is_homo:

I can see a love traingle, I can see a love triangle...
this isn't gonna be pretty is it??
keep this coming Emmy, it's awesome :D:D

That's pretty much I was going to say
Awesome
Emotions flitted through Frank’s eyes like pages of a book.
That was my favourite line, just gorgeous.
Update soon

Luuuurvin iT:

and when do you come into the picture ?

He needed Mikey more than he needed breathing .

holy fck i love that line .. :D

Yes I love that line too. I will not be anything other than Mikey's "girlfriend" until later... I'm just the backdrop.

XoXo
Emmy

and when do you come into the picture ?

He needed Mikey more than he needed breathing .

holy fck i love that line .. :D

I can see a love traingle, I can see a love triangle...
this isn't gonna be pretty is it??
keep this coming Emmy, it's awesome :D:D

this is soo good...
i can't even belive it...
pleease update soon.

still love it!!
update soon!!
btw, i love the pics on the layout, so cute!

this is really good writing and all, and i read it like you asked and i think it's really good... but i'm not going to read any more becuase waycest scares me... always makes me think of the time when it sounded like my younger brother was raping my younger sister... i said SOUNDED btw...

so yeah, it's really good :)

I think I see some drama ahead
Forever...that's a really long time
If it's true love nothing will hold them apart
Gerard's drawings were just...aww!
Update real soon

Mikey was alone in the kitchen crying, muttering “Why doesn’t he love me?” That day, Gerard died.

Nice line. The 'reunion' scene was so sad and poignant, and the realization of 'forever' was just... I mean, awwwww!!!!!

Update when you can. :)