Eternal Triangle - Comments

and once again, hollie is the fun ruiner!

Damn, I wish Hollie could just get lost or something...
or maybe she could go with Zacky instead of Matt...
and let Jaz and Matt be happy together...
I'll shut up now .. ><"
anyway, loved the chapter :D

Woot!
Love you!
i love Orgy!
that sound suss if you didnt understand it was a band...

“I gotta take a piss.” Jimmy announced, getting up and climbing over the back of the booth to get out.

“Thanks for sharing, man.” Brian laughed, shaking his head at his friend.

Haha!
i laughed at that, cuz that is what i do, and how my friends react
XD

i love your writing!
Damn Hollie and her sluts
GO DIE, BITCH!
im not insane, remember...?
but loved it!
im surprised you havent introduced Julia
i can imagine her with Zacky, he being a dick, but you funninily love his girlfriend
that would be cool!!!!
but, i better stop typing before i embarass myslef too much more

I loved the update!
XD

Yeah. It's official. I am throwing an "I hate hollie" party. More soon?

Yeah. It's official. I am throwing an "I hate hollie" party. More soon?

I hope you're not trying to be sneaky when you drop me hints.

I'm beginning to double think things... -_- .... I know how you are. And if my thoughts are right.....then i'm gonna slap a hoe! Yes! I will! But not before I slap the shit out of Matt for thinking with his dick and slap the shit out of Zacky for being a dick! He was awfully quiet this chapter...

Makes me wonder.......

It also upsets me...

Cause now I can't legitamently tell you how much I want them to have VERY angry sex together......

So I won't say it......too bad.....

Um.....i'm pretty sure this post was useless...

Oooooo, looks like something was going on between Brian and Jaz! That would have been priceless if Matt saw him kiss her. He would have pushed Hollie to the ground and stormed over *dun dun dun dunnnnnn* lol

Matt should walk in on Brian and Jaz doing something. That would be hilarious! I'm always up for a good fight.

I LOVE IT AWESOME I WANT MOOOOOOORE!!!!1

:D

I'm all for the night taking three chapters! I loved the update!

But I wanted her and Matt to do something! Gosh, that was so frustrating when nothing happened! And of course Hollie had to show up and spoil things... You're using one of those writing tricks, aren't you? Haha.

And I was hoping that Brian would have picked up on something; but of course he didn't. Too concerned about which bimbo he could get into bed to realize what's up with Jaz.

And, because I'm the Zacky lover that I am, I kinda wanna see something happen with him. But again, that's just me and my love for Zacky going on!

I look forward to the next update! This one totally made my day!

awesome update !! (like always ;))
and i'm not complaining that the night takes 3 chapters !! =P
update soon !! :D

As I read this, Nine Inch Nails came on the radio, ahahaha. I thought I'd share that with you for a little laugh.
Anyway, I enjoyed the two dancing scenes. That was just incredible. Especially, Matt's scene, mhm.
This update was too good, Hollie is starting to get on my bad side, but I still love this story to death.

great update :)
...i love this story XD

Holy effin' shit! HAHAHAHA. So, I love you so much for updating tonight! Yay for the bribe. =]

So man... that was kinda some steamy action going on with Matt and Jaz on the dance floor but NIN does that to people. It's just Trent's voice, you know! HAHAHA. =] But aside from that, wow! Sexual tension much?! Like seriously, I would probably get hot and bothered just watching the damn display from the boys' table. Ha. But man, I was rooting for her and Matt to do something! God! How infuriating they both are! Stupid boys....

And then Slut Edition Barbie had to show up and ruin the evening with her whorish ways! ugh! Seriously, I love the sibling rivalry going on with them cuz it's amazingly done. It makes me hate her even more and want Jaz to win Matt over, except he's being retarded and accepting all of Slut Barbie's advances! Gah! It's irritating.

But ohhh.... dancing with Brian... very nice. =] I wanna dance with Brian too! What a lucky girl. hahaha. I thought he might have picked up on what was really going on with Jaz but nope... too concerned over which blondie's gonna play naked peekaboo with him. =/ typical. HAHAHA.

Aww, well I feel for Jaz now! But the night's not over! there's another chapter coming up! YES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I demand that one soon! hahaha.

Ugh, Hollie.
xx

great story!
can't wait to see what happens when hollie and her barbies arrive

lol i'm jealous you write so much longer than I do. But it is good I had to catch up I forgot to subscibes but I'm doing that now. Keep up the great work

i love the way jaz interacts with the guys, especialy the insults between her and zacky!

This made my day again, dear sister!
i loved it!
gotta love the 'slap me' skirt and Johnnys slappable face!
XD
i laughed!
Great update!
Cant wait for the next installment!
Are they going to get drunk?
i hope so!
and the boys are back!
YAY!
even Zacky and his ass-like demenor...i cant spell
But yes....i loved it sooooo much!

“So does your face, yet we manage to hold ourselves back.” That had to be like my favorite line in the whole chapter! I laughed so hard at that, and earned yet another weird look from my sister.

And what can I say about Hollie? She's just so... Ugh! That is the only thing I can come up with for her right now.

I still like Zacky being a jerk, dunno why... Guess I just like Zacky no matter how much of an asshole he is! And I'm pretty sure he wants her, you can just tell. Just like you can tell Matt wants her but won't say anything, probably in fear of hurting the friendship.

Great update! I can't wait for more!

I'm liking this a lot :)
I'm also already really not liking Hollie, hah.