Eternal Triangle - Comments

"...you’re the one that kept rolling around and making it hard."

Haha, nice.

"That skirt just screams ‘Slap me’.” He informed me, pointing to my skirt and tilting his head to the side.

“So does your face, yet we manage to hold ourselves back.”

--> LOL !!
awesome chapter !! i want to know what's going to happen next, with Hollie and her "friends" !!!
omg, i really can't wait !!!

UPDATE SOON :D

I really dont like Hollie. She makes me want to cry for Jaz because I know what it's like having someone like her. Stupid whore. Lol.

So it really did feel like Christmas morning when I woke up to my friend calling me about her stupid final.... I was on the phone for less than a minute before I was like, "OH MY EFFIN GOD! SHE UPDATED!" and then I cheered, causing my freind to laugh at my stupidity.

Ugh... so Hollie is irritating my soul. I know she's her sister and everything but you'd think that her sister would be such a whore! Eww... like I think I'll die if Matt shows any interest in her. Cuz she's just no good at all. She reminds me of one of those lifesize Barbie dolls... the slut edition. hahaha. Barbie tends to have more class than Hollie. =/ She's such an effin' beezy.... excuse my slang... I've spent too much time talking to my brother. HA.

But ugh! Matt's confusing even me with his over-protective attitude and touchy feely business. Like, how hard is it to tell a girl that you wanna jump her bones you know? It's not like she would object. I wouldn't object, that's for damn sure. Ha. Like seriously though, he's just causing more pent up sexual frustration and it's pissing me off.

But hahah, I loved the conversation... even with the asshole Zacky. He made some harsh comments about her but I think underneath it all, he really wants her, just like Johnny and Brian do. HAHAHAHA. Jimmy's the only one that I haven't really heard much of from this story. ahaha.

Well, I want more and you know that! Ha. I want to know what's gonna happen next when Hollie and her group of plastic bimbos show up to ruin the fun. =/ More soon please! You already know that I loved it! HAH.

Fantastic story. I've always had a thing for in-love-with-my-best-friends fics when there's groping and cuddling involved.

"sometimes I wondered if we really were related" :D
"Oh. He’s so very dead. My love for him isn’t enough to save him now." brilliant :D
"Technically, I wasn’t lying, because I wasn’t mad, I was annoyed. There’s a difference."
“So does your face, yet we manage to hold ourselves back.” that line made me laugh so much ^^"
The more I read your stuff, the more I love this story and the more I love your writting :D
update soon, please!

This is so funny. Her sister needs to go shove it and leave Matt alone.
I love this a lot

That was amazing!
i think it was a cute chapter!
Matt being all cute and kind and what not!
plus, again, i love the long chapters!
They mean more love!
XD
hehe

New Reader.
I'm liking it lots!

oh my goodness. i am so addicted to this story already!
ok so i'm calling it now; ZACKY completes the love triangle!!!!!
and i swear it's not wishful thinking ;] hahaha. but seriously, i can see it now; they're angry, throwing insults and screaming at each other, and then zacky just walks up and kisses her, and then he totally fixes her "one year" problem. god, how could someone go that long? that's like being celibate...
and wow, i wonder if matt's lying. is matt just gonna sleep with hollie because she reminds him of jaz? because that would totally suck.
but i love their relationship! now ok, i am not in love with my best friend, but we sort of have a similiar relationship =] it makes me all happy when i read it. haha i'm gonna make him read it too, and he'll probably end up commenting as well.
but ok, i have to stop because it's like, 3 in the morning and i have work tomorrow =[ i can't wait to see when they'll stop sleeping together and *ahem* ;] lol. lemme know the next time you update girlie! <3

I loved the update, as usual!
And I love the fact that your chapters are so long. I wish my updates were long like yours! They're rather short in my opinion and therefore not as entertaining.
I can't wait for more! I get all excited whenever I see that you've updated!

Oh My God ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !
YOUR STORY IS AMAZING !!!
I loooove long chapters !!!
and the way you describe Jaz's feelings it's just... woa, i was feeling bad almost all the scene Dad's-Birthday/Brian's House... and even after !!!
your writting style is just awesome...
update soon !!! =D

Matt's not interested in Hollie? He's not trying to get into her pants?

LIES!

I'll smack the taste out of his mouth!

Then I'd kiss it better.....but that's not the point....

The point is, now you know how I feel when I can't seem to shut up in chapters. lol. That was a long one!

I like how she siked herself out when Matt was just trying to get some food. Lol. That was priceless.

Besides that....

I still say she should have angry angry sex with Zacky....

I feel some sexual frustrations there...mhmmm....and it's not mines....

Cause God knows....

:|

I love this story. This whole Matt/Hollie thing bothers me.

I love the fact that you make your chapters long. It keeps me happy for a good while. I hate it when people write chapters that are two lines and no point to them. So, keep on writing long. I never want the reading to stop.

I love how you made Jaz's relationship with each of the guys a different one. I could see her ending up with all of them, lol.

Someone should murder Hollie for waking her up so damn early! That is an un-Godly hour, even if it is the day of Lord! Jeez, Jaz is so much nicer than I am. I would've kicked her ass out and gone back to bed. =] But that's just me.

She needs to stop meddling too! Like, it's not her job to be someone else's fashion coordinatior. I'm pretty sure that if Jaz ever needed advice on how to look like a whore, she could find hookers on the street with a better opinion that her. Ha. Oh, and I love how she's trying to rub the whole "possibility of something happening with Matt" in her face. That's exactly what it is... full-blown sibling rivalry and she wants to be the dominant one in the battle.

Ugh... and Matt... like just cuz someone doesn't answer calls or texts doesn't mean that they need to show up at the house! Man, wow.... how much of a worry wart can he be anyway? But he's still stupid for not realizing what's really going on... men are idiots... they can never read through the lines and see what's really happening.

Syn Gates eh? An old crush.... that's cute. But I think Matt has a hard time noticing what's really going on cuz I saw more potential in her and Johnny.... but then again I also see her and Zacky happening on the strict basis of hot, passionate, angry sex. HAHAHA. But Matt needs to maybe look again. And now that I think about it, the amount of emotion behind the delivery of each person's run-down of feelings to Jaz didn't match up... Matt was a little too nonchalant for my tastes.... it makes me suspicious.

HAHAH. I loved it! =] But you already knew that. I mean, duh, you wrote it! I woke up like ten minutes ago and checked the updates in bed and got all giddy about this one that I dragged my ass out of bed ot get the laptop so I could actually leave a comment! =] I can't wait for more. HAHAHA. Soon! I demand soon!

Hollie and Matt can't hook up, okay? It just can't happen, lol. And seriously, how cute is Jaz and Matt? I love their relationship.
So, yeah, I loved the update just as much as I always do. No matter what I'll keep repeating myself about it.
Can't wait for more. <33

I loved the update:)
how she described her sister's friends and all, and then her reaction when Hollie told her that Matt sent her a text... And how she was trying to ask Matt about it, but without asking him straight away... (sorry if it doesn't make much sense, ><" ) anyway, LOVED IT :D

hell of an update!
even if a am as slow as a wet weekend getting to read it!
sorry bout that

Poor Jazzy!
That bitch Hollie!
they nearly got drunk!
XD
haha
but i really loved it!
Twas quite brilliant!

Come on, Matt.