House of Jealous Lovers - Comments

one: Sounds interesting. Love her hair and the descriptions of her tattoos. Can't wait to read the next chapter.

AMAZING.
Loved it totally,
And BRAVO for the Say Anything referance.

Wonderful story! I started it just the other day and had to finish it. I must say that it was enjoyable, heartfelt and involved. Great jog!

woo man took me three days to finish reading this story but i did it!!! i read beginning to end and i loved every minute i don't think i every cried so had reading a story before!!!! can't wait to read more stories from you

it ended off with an engagement.
wow.

the only thing sad about this;
was the fact that this story didn't get 10 stars;
when it soooo deserved it.

i seriously can't believe this is the last time i'm commenting here.
i don't comment alot;
but i really do love your story. :D
the plot was awesome;
and i really thought she'd end up with zacky.
but it was the rev instead.
the rev is hot too. (:

so all's well.

<3!

Awww! It was a fantastic end to a fantastic story. I really enjoyed reading it.

AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWEEEEEEEEEE!
I'm grinning ear-to-ear like a mad woman right now! That ending was absolutely perfect. The ring in the pikachu was really sweet.

FANTASTIC STORY! I really loved it :D

I am grinning like a fool right now... and I have teary eyes at just how damn adorable the end of this was!!

Okay, last epic comment for this story *tear*

*Ahem*

I want to marry Johnny! Oh.. seriously!! You described their happiness soooo amazingly well and I would seriously kill to marry that sexy and adorable man!! Ohhhh.. this is what you wanted the song for? I thought it was for the other thing.. hahahaha. So good thing I did choose Swing Life Away.. perfect!! :D

It was sooo funny when Jason was hitting on Danni's mum.. God, I laughed so damn hard! That boy does need a girlfriend. haha. And Zacky has a new girlfriend! Yay! Everyone ended up all happy and paired off! :D But yes, I'm sure both girls are pretty bummed they'll never get to have their lesbian affair... marriage vows just put a complete dampener on that = p

Ohh.. the moment that he gave her the pickachu (which was such an awesome touch!!) I was grinning like a fool. I wasn't sure if a proposal was to come... but as soon as he handed her the envelope, I knew he had a trip to Japan planned for them.

This made me laugh:

"Is this a ring for me being a badass?"

But oh.. you just got me with the proposal! And he's speech was amazing and I couldnt help but giggle at how nervous the poor guy was. hahaha. I can't say I blame him... after the last time he put his heart on the line. But of course London would accept! She's way better than that hoe-bag Morgan. Who btw, I hope is enjoying the smelly dumpster behind the fish co-op.

"Of course I am! Proposals come with mandatory acceptance sex. Didn't you know that?"

Well, of course! How could she not know that?! hahaha. Like she'd really have any objections... that ring sounded gorgeous! He deserves some accpetance sex!!

Ohh.. I'm so mixed up now. It's gonna take some time for me to get used to there not being anymore updates for this story. I'll be quite sad for a while.. but at least you have my pick-me-up ready and waiting!!

This was seriously great, Julia. I truely loved it and will probably read it all over again many times in the future! :D

its so sad that its over but it ended perfectly!

I loved the ending :)
It was great! but it's kinda sad this story's over!
it was an awesome story!

AW!
that was the cutest, lovilest, best (for want of a better word) ending to a story!
I loved every second of it!
congratulations on writing one of the best stories on Mibba
kudos lovely!
XD

*squeals happily*
YAY!!!
they're back together!!!
loved the ending!!

I started reading this pretty late so I've been trying to catch up over the last week or so. It has become one of my absolute favorite stories on this site. It is incredibly well written and made me want to yell out loud several times. I love, love, love, love it. You are an awesome writer.

Aw.
That was absolutely amazing.
Oh man there's only one left!
I'm going to be so sad when it's over. I love this.

YAY!!!
theyre finally back together!

Super cute update

AWWWWWWWWWWWW!
there is no other word for it at the moment
its just so gosh darn adorable!
and the Snow Patrol song tied in perfectly!
did you know that t was written about the singers dog that died?
dunno if you did know that, but if you didnt, there is a little fun fact fot the day!
XD

the two are just so right for each other!
and to think i was once backing Zacky...
not any more!
only one chapter, but fuck am i looking forward to it
cant wait!!!

I really like this chapter, it was awesome!
really :)

*Throws confetti*

FINALLY! HE GOT OFF HIS BUM AND FIXED IT!

Okay, so that was the most adorable and romantic thing ever... and not cheesy at all!!! I loved it! The song was absolutely perfect.. And my favourite thing was that she didnt just run at him and kiss him.. it was way more realistic that they actually talked things through first.

So, I hate Morgan even more now.. she's such a dirty, skanky whorebag assface! As if you'd fake sleeping with Jimmy... stupid slut. I'm so glad she's out of my life now. I didnt want to have to run her over with my car, drag her some 20 blocks and toss her in a dumpster behind a fish co-op, coz that wouldn't be good for my car. Plus I'd have to touch her nasty self, so i'm very happy you saved me the trouble!!

This part:

"I'm just too easy to read," I replied, thinking back to how Johnny was able to sniff out my lies expertly.

I got the funniest mental picture of Johnny literally sniffing around... great stuff!

The pictures and reminscining (butchered that word) of old times was so great. The one of her and Jimmy in the porn shop was hilarious! And swapping clothes with Johnny.. so funny!! Oh, and her distracting herself by organizing her books, I do that with my DVD's. hahaha.

I loved it! They're together... that is so awesome. He's sweet and she's adorable.. they're so perfect for one another. I'm sad that there's only one more chapter, but at the same time, I'm excited about the new stories! =)

I love you, my Ju Ju Bear!! Team Awesome all the way!! :D

Does it make me horrible if I say that i'm kind of glad there's only two chapters to go? It's coz I'm dying for Gunslinger... that is going to be so awesome!!!

Okay. Firstly, I shall address the Zacky stuff.

*Ahem*

I'm very glad that he's the one that found her and picked her up. He's the one that she needed to wake up next to (technically he wasn't in bed when she woke up... but you know what I mean) and to speak to first about her revelations the night before. I loved how he told her that she'd straddled and kissed him the night before.. that was kind of amusing.. but mortifying on her part. hahaha.

Then the feelings finally came out! And they came out well.. I loved that you had him admit loving her... and that even when they kissed, neither felt anything they should've. It was a great way to close off the feelings and issues between these two characters and I'm happy with it! I'm glad that the tables didnt just turn and have him now in love with her, but her not return it.. this is much better! =)

Her return home was quite amusing. I loved how 'danni' was standing in front of Johnny, all pissed off and wanting explanations from her and the way she glared at Johnny when he asked her to move. I'd so do that.. especially if I was really mad. hahaha. You make me love Johnny even more with this character.. he's so cute and amusing.

Oh, and Johnny's obsession is Law and Order? You guys must have a lot in common then = p Though I found it amusing that he still threw his two cents in without taking his eyes off of the T.V.

Dipshit is one of my favourite words! It's a great word.. Just saying. hahaha.

Now... all we need is for Jimmy to get off his ass and come beg her for forgivness and everything is all good!! :D