House of Jealous Lovers - Comments

AWE! ZACKY LOVES HER TOO I KNOW IT!
*sigh*
he's just a stupid boy and won't tell her.

XD I actually laugh every time I read Romeo&Juliet but I cry every time I see the movie. Is that weird or what? Hmm... maybe it was just because Leonardo DiCapprio's so damn cute in that movie and I didn't want to see him die. It was like Titanic all over again.
/finishes rambling

Amazing update :]

ugh! she should have just told zacky the truth!
i loved the update nonetheless
i love how long your updates always are :)

i REALLY wanna KILL jimmy for picking that slut over london!

OHHHH!
God.
Men are idiots.

Great update.

okay, so i just found this story today
and i have just now finished it...
its been...a time period too long to say and make me not sound pathetic.
but i just want you to know how much i LOVE this story
everything is just...so real.
i cant wait for your next update!

JIMMY YOU STUPID DOUCHE.
And honestly, I dont think he just kissed her. Or in his words, she kissed him.
If he was adjusting his pants, then alot more than that happend! Goooood. I feel so bad for her. I almost cried when she finally broke down at her house. D:

i like this story
i hope this work out in the end

Jason to the rescue!!

But I guess he didnt really rescue.. just tried to comfort = ( And he did a good job! But he should've stayed with her.. regardless if she wanted to be alone. Cept I guess if he's reminding her of Jimmy... You dont want that.

Oh! Yes!!

"I asked you what you were doing and you told me that you wanted to break through the wall like the Kool-Aid man on 'Family Guy' but the couch got in the way," he said through a small laugh.

Of course she did.. hahahahaha!

But awww!! Danni's engaged (I still feel weird writing that) and she's all happy.. but she's so going to feel AWFUL when she finds out what's happened with London. And she's going to be might pissed that London didn't tell her... Comforting your best friend through major heartbreak is much more important than celebrating an engagement.

And.. you got me.. I got teary at this part:

"Why am I never someone's first choice? What's so wrong with me?" I questioned, feeling completely self-conscious about myself.

She just sounds so broken and defeated... and it made me sad :( That's a horrible feeling to have to deal with... and then the end. Falling asleep clutching his shirt... that was so sad too :( *sniffles*

I just told you this on aim... but yes. The twisted part of me still wants her to end up with Zacky... But it's probably coz I have a love for him.. even if he's an asshole. There's a reason she's been in love with him for so long....

Awhhh...JB Dizz...damn that man is sexy! I would love to wake up next to him as well...but trust me: he would not be clothed, harhar(evil laugh)!

I loved the update, poor munchkin is all confused...awwwhhhh...I do feel for her though. As said: she better not go try get sexy with Zacky.
Jimmy better fucking crawl back to her and ask her for forgivness.

AW!
Jason is such a sweety!
gotta love the berry boys!
XD

that chapter nearly made me cry!
Poor London!
but yay for Danni!
i see a wedding on the horizon
maybe a chance for everyone to get drunk and have sex like no tomorrow
though, sex seens to be runing things as of late...
meh

loved the update!
cant wait for more~!

WTF?!
OMFG!!!!
WHAT IN THE HELL, JIMMY?!
YOU JERK!

OH NO!
Dammit.
That's all I can say right now.
Update whenever you can. This story's incredible.

On the contrary, I think it turned out very well! You managed to capture a whole range of emotions in this one, and that's very hard to do.

Damn Jimmy! That's all I have to say about that! =)

how could you be unhappy with that brilliance?
it was amazing!
when she was driving to Jimmy's, i was like, NO!
then morgan?
ah, bitch!
but its good to know a fellow Muse lover is out there!
i cant wait til they tour.

but thats not the point...
Loved the updates!
Sorry i read them late!
XD

As I write this, I have tears... yes. TEARS! So if this is what a chapter you're not happy with affects me... I'm pretty sure I don't want to know how much it would affect me if it was exactly how you wanted it. Scary.

That poor girl!! She just has no luck with men... they all fucking suck!! Seriously... Jimmy is nearly as bad as Zack right now.. I'm so mad at him. Why would you want to be with that skanky, dirty slut?!?! She'll just be with him until something better comes along again, then she'll dump him and he'll expect London to pick up the pieces. Well, fuck that!

I think this girl needs to tell them all to get fucked... and just go lesbian!! hahaha. Not that girls don't have their issues.. but hell, it's gotta be better than dealing with this shit...

That last line.. about always being the second choice.. gah.. that got to me :( Honestly, I thought she'd do something silly like run to Zacky and end up in bed with him... thus bringing in more confusion and everything to her life.

You know.. there's just something messed up with me. Even though he's been a complete douchebag... I still kind of want Zacky to wake up and proffess his love to her! And Jimmy too... So then she gets to pick who she really wants... Call me evil, but I like it! :D

No idea why you didn't like the last update, I think it was great...painful but great!
Ah...men and sex...they don't think about anything else once someone offers...Jimmy is an idiot for all I care, and I hope she that London doesn't do the mistake of running back to Zack, because he's still the same douche he was before...ha!

DAMMIT ZACKY OPEN YOUR FUCKING EYES!
Grrr. He did it again. He played the damn friend card.
Is he honestly that clueless?
Good God.
Fantastic update though. I had to LOL at the Johnny conversation XD

ARGH!! I literally slapped my own forehead when he said the best friend thing AGAIN! I cannot wait for the day that someone just lets loose and tells him exactly how it is! Tells him that he is emotionally torturing London, somone he supposedly cares about.. that he shattered one of his best friends and that he's just been an all round selfish stupid ass!!

Oh, btw, loved this:

"Have you seen him? I couldn't help it! Even when we were young and in high school, he was still incredibly sexy. It wouldn't have been right to deny him."

I am in total agreement with that! And I would definitely be the one to jump him first... seriously... :D

The sweetness of the interaction between London and Zacky during the flashback of him taking her swimming was just... well, sweet. hahaha. I loved how you showed how caring he can be with her.. that he does really love her (albeit maybe only in a platonic way) and doesn't do stuff to intentionally hurt her. The mistakes he makes are just because he's male and therefore a lil 'duh'...

And Jimmy came to her rescue! Took her to the prom when Zacky was being stupid... I could ramble on about his stupidity.. but i'll move on... Yes, Jimmy. So sweet of him.. what an amazing friend! You can really see the deep connection she has with the both of them.

Best lines from that flashback:

"I look fucking sexy in a tux," he winked. - I bet he does!! *drools*

"So, would you like to go to prom with one of the sexiest giants in the universe?" - I do!! And I think he may be THE sexiest giant!

And honestly I was surprised at the beginning of this chapter to realize that nothing real has really transpired with her and Jimmy.. I thought for sure that they were now on the path to their own real relationship.. You surprised me there!

I think I gonna go listen to The Vandals now... I really do love those guys!! :D

ahh. Back down memory lane...

W-O-W
That was hot!
Dude just WHOA!
Amazing update. Mmm I'm kinda mad that was all a dream though. Aww and poor London's al confused :(
More whenver you can this is incredible.