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  • Damsel of Darkness

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    YES! BONERS FOR ALL!

    I love you for incorperating the threesome!! Even if just a dream, it was still totally worth it!! God..... I can't even being to imagine how awesome that would be... gahhhh... Except for them "fighting" over her telling them which one she loved.. that would be hard... I mean, difficult.. hahaha.

    I felt really bad for her in the shower... So tormented by her confusion and guilt. I couldnt imagine a more difficult and restless position to be in... stuck between two of your best friends who you have deep feelings for... It's like being stuck between a rock and a hard place. Someone is bound to get hurt... and at this stage, it's looking to be her... :(

    I have so wanted to do that before! Trash my bedroom because a stupid male has driven me to the point of reckless destruction. The only reason I didnt, was coz I knew I'd have to clean it up... it just didnt seem worth it. I've always wanted to trash a house... like one that's gonna be torn down... just take sledgehammer to it. That would be fun...

    Okay, I got off topic there. Where was I? Oh, yeah.. She is so majorly conflicted. If I were her, i'd want to run away for a girls weekend.. without any males at all. Or just lock myself in the house and not see anyone but Mr Daniels and Mr ben & Jerry's... a girls two best friends :D

    Alright. Shutting up. I look forward to more... but finals come first! See? Tell your spanish teacher I said that.. maybe she will forgive me for distracting you during her class.. = p
    December 12th, 2008 at 12:13pm
  • bloodravyn

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    damn!!
    what a HOTT dream!
    December 12th, 2008 at 09:13am
  • ProverbofHell

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    Uh...three-somes...niiice! Even though it was a dream, and ya didn't let them get finished...still enjoyed it rather much!
    But I knew she'd get in icky situation, getting caught between her feelings for the two men...ah well, that's what ya get!
    December 12th, 2008 at 08:37am
  • kiss my sas

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    Whoa!
    that was...epic!
    Holy fuck!
    my sister walked in the room halfway through,and i shut the window down so quickly
    lol
    that would be one heck of a dream
    loved it
    UPDATE NOW!
    XD
    kidding, whenever ya get the chance, love
    December 12th, 2008 at 07:31am
  • The Dodger

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    Aw that was a great update. And don't worry about updating you can take your time. (XD I'd rather you didn't) Kidding. I know how rough school and shit is.
    December 11th, 2008 at 09:10pm
  • RainbowPIG

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    I honestly dont see how your story has only 4 stars.
    It deserves so much more.
    I love how long your chapters are, and your writing never stops painting a picture in my headd.
    Keep it up!
    December 11th, 2008 at 05:01pm
  • kiss my sas

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    haha!
    Epic guitar hero battle!
    WOOT!
    No one plays it with me at home cuz i beat them
    they get a case of sour grapes.
    pansies

    but massive decision.
    Dun dun dunnnnnnnnnn
    Who will she choose?
    it can not happen soon!
    THIS IS TO GOOD TO END!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    December 11th, 2008 at 12:45pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    EPIC!!!!

    Dance

    Guitar Hero battle was awesome! I love that Danni kicked Syn's ass... god damn would that be fun!!! I'd take a picture and frame it with the title "The Day Synyster Gates Was Owned!" I think we should errect a monument of that too, no? Next to our Team Awesome one :D

    The moment between Zacky and London in her room... it was kind of sad. As if it's not bad enough they have sexual tension and confusing emotions... but now their friendship is really messed up. Though I guess that would be because of the sexual tension and confusing emotions... so this was all a moot point. But you love my ramblings. :D

    I want to go to Japan. TEAM AWESOME TRIP!!

    Oh! Party poopers!! It's clear to everyone else (well, to me, anyways) that Zacky is epically jealous of Jimmy... yet the stupid man wouldnt even know where to begin to admit it... and London has herself believing it isnt possible.. but it's fact!! I think I'll take her aside and tell her that... then buy her some fish and chips to cheer her up.

    I've never had Sake.. but it sounds like good shit that I need to try out!!

    I wonder if Jimmy even cares about Morgan anymore... or if he's totally over that skanky McSlut-features and is bothered by Zacky's sudden infatuation with London... I just realized that the poor guy could get doubly screwed by Zacky!! He stole Morgan... and he could steal London! Oh.. that poor giant man :(

    FYI, Jimmy... girls can so have boners! To have a boner is not necessarily to have an errect penis.. it can also be a state of mind! Duh.. Don't you know anything?!?! *sighs*

    EPIC :D
    December 11th, 2008 at 11:17am
  • RainbowPIG

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    Yep. Definately one of my favourite stories on Mibba. Keep up the amazing work.
    I love how much you update, and how long the chapters are, while you still put alot of effort into the stories, with not just puting in a bunch of fillers to make it longer. :]
    Pleaasee continue for a VERY, VERY long time! [:
    December 9th, 2008 at 06:39am
  • kiss my sas

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    Amazing, as per usual!
    XD
    thanks for letting me be in it!
    XD
    just a quick comment before i scoot off to guitar
    Love your work
    i am going to have to steal your writting talent one day...
    its true
    December 9th, 2008 at 06:07am
  • bloodravyn

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    wtf?!
    no!!!
    bad london!!
    zacky's a dirtbag!!
    jimmy is a sweetie, pick him to give your heart to!
    December 9th, 2008 at 05:28am
  • The Dodger

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    LOL I know the Thriller dance! XD Just thought I'd like to share that with you incase you were interested....which you probably wern't...of well.

    HAAA! I loved that sex and bacon part!
    Fuck I loved this whole update.
    Amazing. :)
    December 9th, 2008 at 12:18am
  • decadent

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    OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD. I never thought I would get addicted to a story .. apparently I did.
    Keep doing that thing that makes you write a story that good and I'll be a happy girl forever. :)
    December 8th, 2008 at 08:00pm
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Damn straight! I bet your readers appreciate me bribing you... = p

    Oh, btw, Zachary James Baker is so about to get a ignited rocket shoved up his ass! Seriously. Motherfucker!! or Morganfucker.. hahaha! I crack me up..

    Anyways, yeah. Can't he just let her go? I really would love to know his emoitons. I want to know if he really has feelings for her or if he's just greedy for affection from her and whether he actually enjoys tugging on her heart strings... I sincerly hope he does have real feelings for her and is just simply fucked up in the head for not doing something about it.

    The breakfast scene.. Hilarious! Thriller is an awesome song.. and I rock that dance, btw. =] It is good cooking music.. You gotta have something with a beat to cook to or your food just sucks. hahaha. Though everyone sucks for crashing her morning after intimate breakfast.. way to kill their boners = p

    I'm still thinking she needs to find herself in a threesome with Jimmy and Zacky.. just think of the possibilties! She has to know all the FACTS before she makes a decision... = p

    Oh, btw.. Loved this:

    "Oh God, sex and bacon. Could God love me any more than he already does?"

    That does sound like a good combination... hahahaha.

    I loved this! As always.. and i'd like more soon.. as always. :D
    December 8th, 2008 at 12:41pm
  • kiss my sas

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    OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!
    FINALLY!

    but i completely agree with Danni...
    Zacky and Jimmy!
    One would die of pleasure!
    XD

    it was very well written!
    XD
    love ya work!
    December 8th, 2008 at 09:21am
  • Damsel of Darkness

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    Oh my.... *fans self*

    That was mighty hot, Julia!! No wonder you didnt want to leave it to sleep the other night... Jeez!!! hahahaha

    I'm still laughing about the fact that I just happened to be listening to Rocket Queen by GNR at the time of their building climax... soundtrack to the story, for sure! hahaha.

    They finally humped like the horny bunnies they are! Jimmy got her good! hahaha. And lil Mr Zacky didnt even enter her mind.. but we know he'll pop up again and just throw her head into disaray. Even more so than what it's in..

    Maybe she should consider a threesome kind of relationship, no? :D Have both pieces of A7x candy for her amusement! I think that's only fair.. then that leaves Morgan with none! Yes! hahaha.

    Now she just needs to have some hot and spicy sex with Zacky.. then decide which one does the job best for her = p

    Btw, I'm going to be late picking up Roxy from work now coz I just had to read this.. she'll be pissed... but it was totally worth it! :D

    More!!
    December 8th, 2008 at 07:15am
  • Aightball

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    FINALLY!
    December 8th, 2008 at 03:29am
  • Memories Remain;;

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    aweee!
    can we say FINALLY?!?
    lol, jk.
    i bet Zacky's gonna realize what he's missing out on, now that she's really gone!
    ahahah! nana nana BOO BOO. that's what he gets.
    I think Jimmy will take good care of her and treat her right. i just hope Zacky doesn't try to fuck that up.
    i'll kick his ass. HAHA.
    can't wait for the next one! <3
    December 8th, 2008 at 02:19am
  • RainbowPIG

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    AND A NEW COUPLE WAS BORN!!
    This is easily, now one of my favourite stories on quizilla.
    I cant get the characters out of my head. Its almost as if I know them in person.. lloll
    YOU SHOULD UPDATE AGAIN TONIGHT! if you do I will looovee you forever and more!!! :D
    Keep writing,
    December 8th, 2008 at 01:45am
  • ProverbofHell

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    It was about damn time them two get a move on and free all that sexual tension that has been building up.
    Guessing that Zacky will notice the change in her, and notice a hickey that Jimmy left just before cumming...he'll be a little depressed, but hey: he deserves it, and I think Jimmy and her are just too good together.

    Can't wait for the next update!
    December 8th, 2008 at 01:37am