The Detention Chronicles - Comments

Oooo... love this! It's kinda like my head =S. Only my thoughts go too fast for the pen, so I give up writing them down =P.

And yeah, the gratuitous picture of Frank was appreciated... hell, why not?!

this is just... wow.
honestly, I need my thesarus to describe your writing...
its beautiful, and lumenesent.
It's amazingly descriptive.
Just plain old wow.
Keep writing hun, you could definetly go somewhere with it.
Bravo!

I like it! Update soon, please!

Oh my god, that was amazing. I would have to quote the story if you wanted a prticular part. Great job, you writing whore.

Your new baby is awesome! I'm not saying it because I like you (LOL), I'm saying it because it's the truth. God, I could go on and on and quote every single sentence; repeat over and over again how amazingly you write, think and all.

It blew me away. And I agree with all the people saying that the summary is awesome. It really is.

Wow. I feel like everything I could try and say has been said already, more eloquently than I could hope to put it.

I love reading refreshing narratives like that where it's just so different from the norm.

Props =)

Pimp Of The Hobos;;:

Wow.
It's an overused word, but hey.

Amazing. The way the person was thinking was so real. I felt like they were actually telling me what was happening in their mind. I loved the way the person was looking at things that really were very mundane but still took over their mind as if they were everything.

I loved the way all the words had nothing and everything to with each other at the same time. I'm not sure if that really makes sense, but it does to me.



I love your writing.

P.S. The picture of Frank Iero in the background was very nice, despite not having much to do with anything. Not my words, yours. lmao :D

Agreed. She summarized everything for me really but I'll repeat it again.

It seems like those words are so unimportant and stuff because its so...disconnected but it just somehow clicks in the end. And again, the way all these unnessecary thoughts just seem to control his mind. It was just amazing.

XoXo
Emmy

since you R&Red lucky for me, ima do this for yewww ^_^

I really, REALLY loved this. You have amazing descriptions, and a very unique chapter because of the dictionary definitions. I love it, and I am subscribing! :D

I fucking love it. It's really good. You're a great writer. =)

^Sherlock^ I love the summary as well.

Now, to be completely off topic: I reread The Echo Never Fades and cried again. Haha.

I already reviewed it. Teehee.

So glad you posted it already.

Like I've already said - a kickass story!!!

And I honestly think it has the best story summary EVER written.

Wow.
It's an overused word, but hey.

Amazing. The way the person was thinking was so real. I felt like they were actually telling me what was happening in their mind. I loved the way the person was looking at things that really were very mundane but still took over their mind as if they were everything.

I loved the way all the words had nothing and everything to with each other at the same time. I'm not sure if that really makes sense, but it does to me.



I love your writing.

P.S. The picture of Frank Iero in the background was very nice, despite not having much to do with anything. Not my words, yours. lmao :D