December 20th, 2008 at 03:43pm
I'm the Kind of Human Wreckage That You Love - Comments
-
-
yeah instead of hopefully you could use maybe "thankfully" just because that's more what you mean, hopefully is used more for something you wish for. and also instead of all you should probably use "whole" or "entire" it would sound better in english. but i must say, you write fantastically in english for someone who is not a native speaker, you convey emotions and thoughts and give descriptions better than some native english speakers so great job! and i really love this story, i always get so excited when i get the email about your update. keep up the wonderful work! <33December 19th, 2008 at 11:38pm
-
omg what is she thinking dude awsome update cant wait for the next one :DDecember 19th, 2008 at 09:48pm
-
Awesome story. Just a tip though, a lot of the time you use 'hopefully' wrong.December 19th, 2008 at 08:14pm
-
I loved the update! I can't wait to see what happens next!December 19th, 2008 at 04:18pm
-
I can't wait to see if they talk or something...it would be really interesting. And I wonder what the fuck he is going to say to her...December 19th, 2008 at 04:07pm
-
Oh I love the banners.
And the update.December 19th, 2008 at 03:33pm -
*Standing on the rooftops everybody scream your heart out*- Damsel Of Darkness:
- Aww... poor thing. She seems like she just needs to go to the top of a building and just scream her head off to release some of those pent up emotions and stress. hahaha.
I look forward to more, as always =]
lol it reminded me of the song... lol anyway
i actually can't wait for when matt finds out
i dont know if they were like really close but they are still related
im waiting to see if he'll go all softy and be "glad" or if he'll get mad & wont believe her
also can't wait for both ady and brian to admit they both need each other
i am obsessed with this story <3December 19th, 2008 at 02:34pm -
awesomeDecember 19th, 2008 at 01:45pm
-
Aww... poor thing. She seems like she just needs to go to the top of a building and just scream her head off to release some of those pent up emotions and stress. hahaha.
I look forward to more, as always =]December 19th, 2008 at 01:39pm -
ahhh what should she do?!
I really don't know ahahaha
more soon!December 19th, 2008 at 05:36am -
niark niark !! genre le mec qui en peut plus de la vie XD ca y est, il l'a retrouvée.... mais NAN !! :p meme pas... lol ^^' VIVEMENT LA SUITE !
vu comment t'étais partie ds ton trip qd t'as eu l'idée de la suite, jpense que ca va etre + que pas mal XD !!!December 18th, 2008 at 06:04pm -
aww brian! that was really sweet. loved it! <3 oh and those banners rocked!December 18th, 2008 at 12:48am
-
lovedDecember 17th, 2008 at 09:28pm
-
God damn it!
I love those banners! likey,likey....as said before,update asap!
XDDecember 17th, 2008 at 07:52pm -
omg :shock:
what the fuck hes crying coz he missed her
omg update asap love awsome update :DDecember 17th, 2008 at 07:47pm -
OMG!!
is he crying?! oh-my-God....
what is she going to do?!?!December 17th, 2008 at 05:32pm -
OMG OMG OMG
That's all I can think to say right now I had a nice comment but all I can say is.
OMG OMG OMG
♥♥♥December 17th, 2008 at 05:13pm -
Aww, Bri was crying! But like Damsel said, she souldn't just forgive him like that. He's done a lot to her, it should take a while before she forgives him.
Great update!December 17th, 2008 at 04:31pm -
Ohh... they all suck for leaving her there alone with him!! That's just cruel.. you don't spring that kind thing on a girl that's just gotten out of hospital!!
Oh my... He was crying! Aww.. I actually felt kind of bad for him in that moment.
But... I still think that she shouldn't just instantly forgive him.. he screwed up majorly... and even though he thought she's been dead all this time.. it doesnt make up for how much he hurt her. Not even close....December 17th, 2008 at 03:17pm
But yeah, why did he leave her? *pouts*