" Jack forced herself to detach. She ordered her mind to leave the room, and go to a place where she really was a princess, where her tears were diamonds, her blood was rubies, her bruises were amethysts and saphires under her skin. She was a princess now, away from pain, away from the treacherous prince who was Mikey. She sparkled and shone, and she was so beautiful that she glittered, and that banished away all the bruises, tears, blood and sadness."i really loved that part.
Your way of writting was amazing btw, I really enjoyed reading the whole story. Good job!