i thought i would look at your story too and comment also to be fair and for common courtasy (sp?) and it turns out i like it a lot. very unique prolouge. even more kudo's for you ^_^ keep up the writing. :D
wow... this story is so different... instead of the 2 love birds, you did an entire different sitatution... i could never come up with that.... but then again, i don't write stories, i read them... YOU CAN WRITE DA SHIZ DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!