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good update (:

Wow...i jus read all this shiz ... damn
thats depressing.
hehe *thinks* i beat my bro up. and he's 20, and im 14 hehe.
but i like the story alot

oh my mcfudgement

wowness still

Wow. I just read all of that.
I almost cried.

ohhh, i just read all of it.
it's really sad, but really good.

aww

hes so cute there
. . . until it comes tot he part where he's planning his sister's tormented future :|

woooooww;

i still want to hit Mikey :|

wowness

^^ i seconds that

Mikey's phsychotic behaviour scares me
especially when he wanted to hug Jac;
><.

e;lgtkf;lkj

stupid Mikey .
:shock:

nice chapter, loved it

wow...this story is awesome

okay, more like addictive

okay, i lie, REALLY addictive

i thought i would look at your story too and comment also to be fair and for common courtasy (sp?)
and it turns out i like it a lot. very unique prolouge. even more kudo's for you ^_^
keep up the writing. :D

Thank you everybody!

:shock:

addictive.

more.more.morree.

wow... this story is so different... instead of the 2 love birds, you did an entire different sitatution... i could never come up with that.... but then again, i don't write stories, i read them... YOU CAN WRITE DA SHIZ DUDE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Wow. This is...amazing.

Well written by far. I've never seen anything like it, but its really really good.

Depressing...but good.
More whenever ya can.

:( thats sad .

aahh, stupidMikeyfuckface.
that must REALLY hurt :cheese: