I'm on chapter 4 now, and I'm amazed at the details you've put into this! It's so good! This also made me laugh:
There was a door in front of me, which most average people would consider to be a mere closet. I knew better than that, because I’m not average and hell I’m not even a person.
I just started reading this, and I am laughing my ass off at this part: I pretended to be shocked. “How could some asshole do that to you?! If you were my girlfriend, I would never treat you like that.”
“I wish there were more guys out there like you,” she sighed.
“I have an idea, if you’re interested. Why don’t we go over by those bushes and have a little fun?”
She was hesitant to answer, and I could tell. So I made sure to have direct eye contract with her, locking her in a trance. “O-ok, yeah, let’s go over there.”
ROTFL Oh man, Matt is a character. *keeps reading*
oh fu** i missed a chapter ahhh these last two are so damn amazing i totally didn't expect that what Syn told Nikki, deffinitly not i seriously don't know if i should believe Lillian or not she just so mysterious and what will Jared do now that Lillian told him about Shads' plan and now while running through the cathredal she ran into Shads and Zacky i'm really looking forward for more hope you update soon :)
...damn i'm not sure what to think of rev's sister is she good or bad...i'm not sure, i can't make up my mind...but i know if she is a fake i want her to die...though i do have a feeling that shadows will kill her anyway
jared is such a fucking tard, i don't get why he would listen to a girl over his brother. he's been with them for quite some time. wouldn't he think that shannon would know what he's talking about.
and poor nikki, i wonder if she has another plan up her sleeves.
wow i love the little twist you had. i totally wasn't expecting that to have happened at all but i couldn't exactly trust them when they showed her that memory first.
damn jackass jared how could he not trust his own bro *shakes head* ui syn will 'handle' it wouldn't have it any other way ;) but awsome story ,writing, characters you just have to love sadistic A7X hope you update soon looking forward to the next chapter
ugh jared's suck a jackass. really, how could he not believe shannon? that was just plain stupidty on his part. i wanted shannon to kick him or something.
and of course it's gonna be syn who deals with nikki. wouldn't have it be anyone else ;)