damn, does she have to stay with them since they turned her? that sucks, and they're manipulating her too.
but excellent chapter. i hope that shannon is able to talk sense into jared...which, i guess in this case you made him the older brother. shannon's actually older by a year in "real life" lol. but most people make jared older anyway haha.
update soon!I want to know why they would do that to her!I also want to know if she is gonna stay true and stick with Jared and the rest of the fam or will she become a member of Shadows clan,it might seem common to have her go with Shadows clan (the enemies clan like any other similar story) but the way you wrote the story makes it so much more interesting like you can tell it can actually be written as a book if it hasn't already,anyway,enough talking,I check back for more updates sooner or later!