My Scars Are Yours Today - Comments

Amazing suspence. Very good story so far.

I love this story, it's amazing :D
keep writing chapters!
I wanna know what happens next D:

Woo i got mentioned ^_^
Took me a while to figure out the whole "naming the dog happy" thing. But does this mean that the dog is going to die? I mean she did wonder that question with the human Happy, when he was going to be killed or whatever.
Any nice chapter.

its sooo exciting! =D please keep updating!

Ah, I simply love it. It sounds good so far. Joker is the best.=]

Wouldn't it be wierd if Ivy's reason was the same reason bruce didn't say he was batman? "To protect him" from what i wonder>?

Please update soon. I can't wait to see what happens. And I totally want to steal Ivys outfit.

That chapter was total kickass. Couldn't help but feel you were in a bit of a rush when writing? it was a bit short, even though the description was awesome. My advice to you would be to lengthen it alittle. Keep readers reading. But then again. sometimes a short chapter is needed. Hmm....

I love this story =D
It's just like, I don't even know. The whole plot is just awesome and I can't explain it =/
Hope you can update soon.

I have to say that Jinx has some of the best ideas ever in this update.
Yep I like how this is turning out ;]

This new chapter was excellent! In so many lovely ways.:D

“I’ve been watching you this past week and I’ve never seen… never seen such a small delicate thing with so much pent up rage. Is he training you?”
- This was some wicked awesome dialect, and its very much appealing.

“You are so different, I want to keep you.”
- Tehe, The second half is what gets me. I want to keep you..like a pet!!! Haha.

'defenceless' should be defenseless,shouldn't it? I'm not certain, but I've always read it as defenseless. Not a big deal, I just thought I'd let you know( that is, if its right, heh.)

Her heart hammered against her chest and her muscles contracted as she pulled against her restraints in a panicked attempt to escape and move away from the sociopath in front of her.
- ..Poetic in a way, it just kind of flowwwedd and I liked it. Pretty. :)

And I definitely noticed the improvement in the detailing. Woot!:)

..Overall, this chapter is pretty much one of my favorites so far. As I said before it *was* excellent. As the chapters go on, it seems like everything is getting better and...well I don't know what to say.

Thanks for the update!

I seriously feel sorry for the poor girl. :omfg:
I like how this is progressing though, I love the whole ordeal she's going through and how The Joker seems to be taking a shine to her/ Jinx. I'd really like to see how the relationship between Jinx, The Joker and herself develops. I can't wait to carry on reading.

Yay, you actually listened to me. I honestly have no idea where we keep the art stuff though...

Thank you Beki for making her update ^_^
Woo Blood!

Chapter seven;

I love how he's documenting her as bait. I really like the scene that it creates as well, the use of description is fantastic, especially in the first paragraph. Your doing a great job of portraying the Joker as well, I can't wait to read on to see if she'll be saved.

I'm finally up to date with the updates/ comments :crazy:

Chapter six;

I feel sorry for Ivy, that all sounds quite painful. Jinx seems to be getting more and more eager to join the Joker, I can't wait to see if she gets her own way against Ivy's wishes. I really like the way this chapter's written as well, even if it is a filler.
:cute:

That was a bit too short for my likings... But awesome anyways ^_^
Didn't he try and do that in the Dark knight?

Yes! This was an awesome valentine's day gift! Haha. Well, I probroably don't have to tell you, but I loooved the chapter, really I did. (Yay! Joker is back!yay!) Heh. Although, I pretty much expected the Joker to like whip out some kick-ass when she spit on him. but tis okay.

"He’s filming you Ivy, he’s documenting you at your weakest. Don’t respond to me at all, he wants that. Jinx’s words were calm and unlike they had been moments previously. "
^ I like that line, because it shows their fear of being 'seen at their weakest.'

Uhm, other than that, I the only bit I would suggest it adding a bit more detail into the story. Like the scenery, and--I don't know, just a tad more descriptions.

Thanks for the update, and I hope you have/ had a good valentine's day!:)

Chapter five;

Jinx sure is a cunning character, I'd love to see how she carries on manipulating Ivy.

' “You! You planned this! You saw him coming and never warned me! You knew he was going to be here tonight!” Ivy suddenly yelled as realisation hit her.'
I like this part [this is the bit that I can't really explain], I just like the way she shouts out to Jinx in rage [that has to be the lamest explanation ever]

I can't wait to carry on reading to see what Jokey will do to her.

i love this story!
=]
anything with joker and batman catches my eye.
and this is the best one yet.

Haha, I love that it took two of them to control Ivy. This was niiiiiiccce:D, even though it was filler-ful. :) But that's okay too, 'cause I believe the next one will be awesomeness..in the normal way? Eh, I'm tired, dunno if that makes any sense..but I know what I mean, at least. I hope you do too. :/ Heh. Well, thanks for the update!