hmmm... interesting... I'd like to see where this is going. so i'll subscirbe ^_^
December 19th, 2008 at 11:03pm
First comment! I like what you've got so far. It sounds like it'll be a really interesting Joker story. One that deviates a bit from the Dark Knight script. Just a suggestion: in the line where you say - can’t you remember how we were like best friends when you were fourteen? - I think it'll sound better if you just put - Can't you remember how we used to be best friends? It's just a suggestion but I think it'll flow better that way.
I can't wait for the next update.